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1、英语写作考试部分 . Gone up increased set up established Put up with tolerate looking into investigating Figure out determine put into practice implement Come up with developed make up constitute Get rid of eliminate keep up maintain Gone down decrease thinking considering . Structure of Data Commentary Data
2、 commentaries usually has these elements in the following order. 1. location elements and/or summary statements 2. highlighting statements 3. discussions of implications,problems,exceptions,recommendations,or other interesting aspects of the data .信息性摘要 比较流行的信息性摘要架构有: ObjectiveMethodologyResultsConc
3、lusions 客体 方法 结果 结论 BackgroundPurpose and aimMethodsResultsConclusions 背景 目的和目标 方法 结果 结论 Background+purposeMethodologyResultConclusion 背景 +目的 方法 结果 结论 .Lecture 7 exercises Section One The following paragraph is extracted from articles submitted to a journal. Obviously it is a poor introductory parag
4、raph. Please revise them. (1) In this paper, in view of the randomness uncertainty and fuzziness uncertainty of meteorological parameters(气象参数 ) in ice disaster weather, we established a wind and ice loading risk analysis model, and proposed a fuzzy risk predictive method. This paper aims to build b
5、asic model of risk assessment and provide warning information of the loading line to operator. Key To build a basic risk assessment model and to provide warning information of the loading line for operators, we established a wind and ice loading risk analysis model, and proposed a fuzzy risk predica
6、tive method based on the randomness uncertainty and fuzziness uncertainty of meteorological parameters in ice disaster weather. Section Two (1)这种新方法具有效率高、容易调整的优点。 【 Incorrect】 This kind of new method have the advantage of high efficiency, easy adjustment. 【 Correct】 This new method has the advantage
7、s of high efficiency and easy adjustment. (2)【汉语原句】本文首先讨论了这种信号的特点,然后讨论了它的产生。 【 Incorrect】 This paper first discusses the features of this signal, and then its generation is described. 【 Correct】 This paper first discusses the features of this signal, and then describes its generation. 3)【汉语原句】这台设备的特
8、点是操作简便,价格低廉。 【 Incorrect】 The features of this device are easy in operation and low in price. 【 Correct】 The features of this device are easy operation and low price.或 The device features easy operation and low price. (4)【汉语原句】强调指出了光强随圆柱体直径变化的正弦规律 . 【 Incorrect】 The sine law of the variance of the l
9、ight intensity brought due to the variance of the cylinder diameter has been pointed out emphatically. 【 Correct】 The sine law of the variation of the light intensity with the cylinder diameter has been emphasized. 5)【汉语原句】我们的方法与以前讨论同一问题的文章中所述的不同。 【 Incorrect】 Our method is different from previous a
10、rticles discussed the same problem. 【 Correct】 Our method is different from those presented (described) in the paper available (published before) on (discussing) the same problem. (6)【汉语原句】只有通过对该系统性能的研究,我们才能了解它的优点。 【 Incorrect】 Only through studied the performance of the system, its advantages can b
11、e understood. 【 Correct】 Only through the study of the performance of the system, can we understand (appreciate) its advantages. (7)【汉语原句】本文对提高打印速度和印字质量提供了一种机辅设计手段。 【 Incorrect】 This paper provided a kind of means of computer aid design for progressing the printing speed and the printing quality. 【
12、Correct】 This paper presents a CAD method for increasing the printing speed and improving the printing quality. (8)【汉语原句】同时给出了三轴稳定跟踪器的数学描述及全补偿条件。 【 Incorrect】 The mathematical description and the full-compensation conditions of the 3-axes steady-tracking principle are also given. 【 Correct】 The math
13、ematical description of and the full-compensation conditions for the 3-axis steady-tracking principle are also given . (9)【汉语原句】文中比较了 STM 和 ATM,表明 ATM 将是 BISDN 的基础。 【 Incorrect】 STM and ATM are compared. It shows that ATM should be the ground of BISDN . 【 Correct】 A comparison of STM with (and) ATM
14、(或 A comparison between STM and ATM) is made, which shows that ATM will be the basis of BISDN. (10)【汉语原句】对构件的承载能力作了具体的分析。 【 Incorrect】 The detailed analysis of the ability of bearing loads of the components is given. 【 Correct】 A detailed (concrete) analysis of the ability of the components to carry
15、 loads is made. (11).这个方法需要精确的定位,这使得它的实现具有一定的难度。 【 Incorrect】 This method requires accurate location and this makes its realization have a little difficulty. 【 Correct】 This method requires accurate location, which makes (thus making) its realization somewhat difficult. (12)对 A 的识别和对 B 的确定是使用这一方法的先决
16、条件。 【 Incorrect】 The recognition of A and determining B are the prerequisite for the use of this method. 【 Correct】 The recognition of A and the determination of B are the prerequisites for the use of this method. 13. 最后提出了实现这种方法应注意的一些问题和解决方法。 【 Incorrect】 At last, we provided some problems that cou
17、ld be noted in implementing this method and solving ways. 【 Correct】 Finally, some problems that deserve to be noted in implementing this method and their solution are presented. (14) 由于缺陷的存在,构件的疲劳寿命将大大降低。 【 Incorrect】 Because of the existing of the defect, the fatigue life of the components will de
18、crease very much. 【 Correct】 Because of (Due to) the existence of the defect, the fatigue life of the components will be decreased (shortened) greatly. (15) 导出了一个计算电荷分布的简单公式,最后举了若干例子。 【 Incorrect】 A simple formula to calculate the charge distribution is derived and some examples are given in the end
19、. 【 Correct】 A simple formula for calculating the charge distribution is derived and finally some examples are given. (16) 并讨论了这一方法与扫描法相比的优点。 【 Incorrect】 As compared with the scanning method, the advantages of this method has discussed also. 【 Correct】 The advantages of this method over the scannin
20、g method have also been discussed. (17) 已知常数 K,就能算出 C来。 【 Incorrect】 Giving the constant K, C can be calculated. 【 Correct】 Given (Knowing) the constant K, one (we) can calculate C. (18) 锡的熔点没有铅的高。 【 Incorrect】 Tin does not have a melting point as high as lead does. 【 Correct】 Tin does not have as h
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