2020年中考英语热点专题突破训练七书面表达之热点话题类（二）.doc

热点07 书面表达之热点话题类（二）【热点话题】 话题：垃圾分类；校园欺凌；共享单车；网购；科技创新；低头族【限时检测】（建议用时：30分钟）A（2019江苏省淮安中考）话题：垃圾分类难度：建议用时：5分垃圾污染环境并危害人类健康。为了有一个好的校园环境，也为了避免校园垃圾污染，作为学生，我们需要行动起来。请你根据下列要点提示，代表Saving the Environment Club 写一封英文倡议书，向全校学生发出倡议。要点：1)垃圾不仅污染环境，而且会危害我们健康；2)我们不应该到处乱扔垃圾；3)我们应该将旧书本或旧衣服送给其他人，而不是扔掉；4)纸张要两面使用；5)我们要养成垃圾分类的习惯以便于纸张、旧报纸、玻璃等能被回收利用。注意：1)字数：80字左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数）2)文章必须包含所有提示内容，并可作适当发挥；3)不得出现真实姓名和校名；4)条理清楚，语句迪顺，意思连贯，书写规范。参考词汇：面side；养成习惯form the habit of；分类sort，回收利用recycleDear fellow students,_Saving the Environment ClubMay24, 2017【写作思路】这是一篇给材料作文，代表Saving the Environment Club 写一封英文倡议书，向全校学生发出倡议，来避免校园垃圾污染。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：We all know that，we shouldnt，we will，Lets等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【参考范文】Dear fellow students,We all know that rubbish can cause many problems. It not only pollutes the environment but also is harmful to our health.As students, what should we do to produce less rubbish and make the school environment clean? First, we shouldnt throw away rubbish everywhere. Second, we should give our old books or clothes to others instead of throwing them away.In order to protect our forests and produce less rubbish, we should also use both sides of paper. In addition, we should form the habit of sorting rubbish so that the rubbish such as paper, old newspaper and glass canbe recycled.In this way, we will not only enjoy a clean school, but also make a difference to our environment. Actions speak louder than words. Lets take action now!【写作亮点】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了垃圾打来很多问题，接下来介绍我们为了减少垃圾，保护校园环境应做的事，最后号召大家行动起来。此处be harmful to, throw away, instead of,in order to, in addition, form the habit of doing sth, in this way, make a difference, take action等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。B（广东省深圳市2019中考英语模拟）话题：校园欺凌难度：建议用时：5分近年来，我国校园欺凌事件屡有发生，而遭受校园欺凌的学生容易情绪抑郁、焦虑，不敢去学校，甚至会出现心理问题等严重后果。 请以 My opinions about school bullying 为题， 写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的看法。提示：1. What do you think of school bullying?2. What will you do if you are bullied or you see somebody else being bullied?要求：1. 所给提示信息应全部包括，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；2. 80词以上。参考词汇：心理问题mental health problemsMy opinions about school bullying_【写作思路】本文属于话题作文，谈谈你对校园欺凌的看法。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。【参考范文】My opinions about school bullyingSchool bullying is a big problem that has got more and more attention in society. Being bullied can make students feel scared or upset. Some students are afraid of going to school. School bullying can even lead to more serious mental health problems. So how should we stop school bullying?If I see somebody being bullied or I am bullied, I will tell the teachers or my parents at once. It is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own.【写作亮点】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如make sb do, be afraid of, lead to, mental health problem, at once, on ones own, it is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own中it作形式主语以及比较级and比较级。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。C（2018年江苏省苏州市高新区九年级二模）话题：共享单车难度：建议用时：5分共享单车在苏州投入使用以来，给人们带来了诸多便利，受到人们的追捧，改变了人们的出行方式，但同时也遇到了一些挑战，是国民素质的照妖镜，请你根据表格中信息的提示，给21世纪英文报写一篇关于共享单车看法的稿件。社会现状自从出现，饱受赞誉。诸多优势1. 有益健康，减少污染2. 费用不高，负担得起3. （自拟一条）存在问题1. 未及时归还2. （自拟一条）你的观点我认为政府要鼓励人们正确使用共享单车。要求：1.词数90左右 （开头已给出，不计入总词数）。2.短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥。3.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。Bike-sharingShared-bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. _【参考范文】Bike-sharingShared-bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. It has many advantages. First of all, using shared-bikes is not only good for health, but also less pollution. Secondly, it is not expensive and people can afford it. In a word, it brings a lot of convenience to people, which is pursued by people and changes the way people travel.But shared-bikes also have some challenges. Some people cant return it in time. Some do not cherish it, causing serious damage to the shared-bike.I think the government should encourage people to use shared-bikes properly.【写作亮点】1.题干解读：本题要求写对共享单车的看法，属于议论文写作。作者开篇就明确共享单车的优势和好处；然后笔锋一转介绍使用中存在的问题；最后表明观点，提出使用建议。2.例文点评：这篇习作是分总式结构。本文时态是一般现在时，主要以第三和第一人称展开论述，观点明确，内容充实，结构完整，表达条理，是一篇优秀的习作。3.高分亮点：短语：more and more popular, in daily life, first of all, be good for, not onlybut also, in a word, a lot of, in time, encourage sb. do sth.句型：First of all, using shared-bikes is not only good for health, but also less pollution.（非谓语动词结构）It is not expensive and people can afford it.（并列结构）In a word, it brings a lot of convenience to people, which is pursued by people and changes the way people travel.（定语从句）I think the government should encourage people to use Shared-bikes properly.（宾语从句）D（四川省眉山市2019年中考考前预测试）话题：网购难度：建议用时：5分现在越来越多的人在网上购物，网购已成为流行趋势，二网购的利弊也成为人们讨论的焦点，请参考下面的信息，并结合就的观点些一短文，谈谈你的看法。1.方便，可以在家买东西，不受时间限制。2.有很大的商品信息，可以买到当地没有的商品。价格较便宜。3.买货容易退货难；实物和图片有差距。4.网络支付不安全。 _【写作思路】本文需要写一篇小议论文，主题是网上购物，需要讨论到网上购物的利和弊，注意合理分段，使得文章结构清晰，可以先总起陈述，然后用一段来描述优点，再用一段描述劣势和不足，最后一段收尾，这样的作文就会条理清晰，结构合理。具体来说，每个观点在陈述的时候要注意表达准确。【参考范文】Now Internet Shopping is more and more popular in the world.Its a new way of shopping. It has lots of advantages. The most important is convenient. You can shop whenever you like because the online shops are open 24 hours a day. It is easy to buy goods and it is also easy to find the things that you cant buy in the shop. And they are cheaper. Besides, we can learn lots of information about goods.Every coin has two sides. So is Internet shopping. You cant see the material objects or check their quality. Usually the pictures are more beautiful than the goods. So when we get the goods and dont like them, they sometimes are not easy to give back. Whats more, its not safe to pay through the internet. We should be careful when we shop on the internet.【写作亮点】首段总起介绍，挑明这篇作文的主题Internet Shopping。第二段开始描述优势，这里用到了无论什么时候你喜欢/想要（whenever you like）结构，在表达.是开放的也很准确，用了be open。比较级的应用也相对准确，例如cheaper。连词的使用也是亮点，besides意为除此之外。在谈到劣势的时候引用了俗语Every coin has two sides.，是个亮点。Whats more也被合理使用到了，意为此外，避免与besides重复，体现了文章语言的多样性。总体来说要点均被提及，语言准确富有活力。E (2019届山西中考英语专题)话题：科技创新难度：建议用时：5分现在的科技日新月异，各种发明以及高科技产品成为了我们生活中不可缺少的一部分，如电脑、笔记本电脑（laptop）、手机（mobile phone）、平板电脑（iPad）、数码相机（digital camera）等。请结合自己的经历来描述你最喜欢的一种发明，以及你喜欢该发明的理由。要求：1. 词数不少于80词；2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。_【写作思路】考生要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。首先要阐明自己的观点，选择自己最喜欢的一种发明，然后根据英文要点提示，阐述喜欢这种发明的理由，时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。【参考范文】Among all the modern inventions, laptop is my favorite one. I think it is the most amazing invention in the 21st century. With a laptop, I can work, study and entertain everywhere. A laptop can enable me to get the latest information whenever I want. Besides, I can keep in touch with my friends and family through e-mail and QQ at any time and in any place.I used to study in a faraway place, so I always felt lonely and missed my family and friends very much. But since I got my laptop, I could chat with them and even see them every day. I really like my laptop. I think in the future, everybody will have his or her own laptop.【写作亮点】重点短语：Among all the modern inventions 在所有的现代发明中；get the latest information 获取最新消息；get to the Internet 上网。高分句型：1. I think it is the most amazing invention in the 21 st century. 我认为它是21世纪最让人感到惊异的发明. （I think后面跟宾语从句）2. I can keep in touch with my friends and family through e-mails and QQ at any time and in any place 我可以通过电子邮件和QQ随时随地于朋友家人保持联系。（keep in touch with和保持联系）F (湖北省武汉市华师一附中光谷分校2018-2019学年度下学期5月考)话题：低头族难度：建议用时：5分随着互联网的发展，手机已被广泛使用，我们身边的低头族随处可见。请你根据以下中文提示，以Refuse to be phubbers为题写一篇发言稿，呼吁大家不要做低头族。要点如下：1 现象：很多人在聚会，吃饭，甚至走路或过马路的时候低头看手机2 后果：过多的低头族玩手机影响家人与朋友之间的关系，影响学习、工作和睡眠，甚至会引发交通事故3 呼吁大家正确使用手机（如：合理安排使用手机的时间，查阅和学习有关的信息.）4 可适当自由发挥参考词汇 phubber n.低头族 be lost in 沉迷于 harm n.伤害Refuse to be phubbersWith the development of the Internets, smart-phones are widely used among people. Phubbers can be seen everywhere. 【写作思路】这是一篇话题作文。以refuse to be phubbers为题写一篇发言稿。短文重点是两个方面，一是现象与弊端：揭示现代人用手机的恶习及其产生的危害；二是观点与方式：告诉人们怎样正确的使用手机，利用好这个现代的通讯工具。短文主要用一般现在时态。第三人称或第一称形式。 认真阅读提示要点，确定主题，根据要点列出提纲，所写内容必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。尽量使用高分句型。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。【参考范文】Refuse to be phubbersWith the development of the Internet, smart-phones are widely used among people. Phubbers can be seen here and there. While eating with family members or getting together with friends，some are always busy playing with their mobile phones. It has bad effects on the relationship with their relatives and friends. Even worse，when some people cross the street，they still concentrate on their mobile phones，which can easily cause traffic accidents. Its too dangerous. And others stay up playing games. I think it is really bad for their health，work and study. In my opinion，wed better make good use of smart-phones. Dont depend on them too much. And I do believe that face-to-face conversations will bring us more pleasure than chatting online. Lets raise our heads and refuse to be phubbers from now.