write a letter for advice.ppt

WhenImeettrouble,Wouldyouliketohelpme?假设你是李华。我想买英语电子词典想听听假设你是李华。我想买英语电子词典想听听你的建议。请根据以下提示，用英语你的建议。请根据以下提示，用英语给我回一给我回一封信封信，推荐我买电子词典。，推荐我买电子词典。建议内容：建议内容：1.1.方便，快捷方便，快捷 ；2.2.内置多部字典，能发音；内置多部字典，能发音；3.3.能储存资料。能储存资料。4.1004.100词左右。词左右。Ihavetroubleinmakingadecision,canyougivemesomesuggestions?How to write a letter for adviceWriting guidance(审题审题)It is important to form a good habit of looking atrequirements.Lets take the passage example to discuss how to check requirementsConsider the following questionsAnalyze the example passagchoose correct personal pronoun？人称代？人称代词词（person）The style of the passage？（体裁）？（体裁）The topic of the passage?（主（主题题）Advice to buy an electronic dictionaryHow to organize the passage？(order)（怎（怎样组织样组织）The tense of the passage？(时态时态)(when)The first/the second A letter for adviceReason logically一般现在时一般现在时/将来时将来时How many parts consist of the letter?开头（开头（beginning）-开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点.1或2个句子(state your idea)主体主体(body)-对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议。5或6个句子(reasons and evidence)结尾结尾(ending)-呼应开头，重申观点。1或2个句子(restate your opinion.)结尾结尾(ending)-呼应开头，重申观点。1或2个句子(restate your opinionThe most important part of the letter Body-you should analyze some issues and present your opinions and suggestions(reasons and evidence)what is your advice?what is your advice?（what?what?）why do you come up with these why do you come up with these suggestionssuggestions（why?why?）what benefits get from advice?what benefits get from advice?Pay attention toPay attention to：say it in a polite say it in a polite way;take care of others feelingsway;take care of others feelingsHOW TO WRITE三个步骤Step 1 List the key pointsStep 2 Make sentences Step3.Form a passage and polish假设你是李华。我想买英语电子词典想听听你的建议。假设你是李华。我想买英语电子词典想听听你的建议。请根据以下提示，用英语请根据以下提示，用英语给我回一封信给我回一封信，推荐我买电子，推荐我买电子词典。词典。建议内容：建议内容：1.1.方便，快捷方便，快捷 ；2.2.内置多部字典，能发音；内置多部字典，能发音；3.3.能储存资料。能储存资料。4.1004.100词左右词左右Step 1 List the key points1.Awisechoice2.Leadto/contributeto3.Convenient4.Assoonaspossible5.consult/lookup6.Meetwith7.Anumberof/avarietyof8.WhynotStep 2 Make sentences 1.对你来说，买一本电子词典是一个明智的选择。(It isn.for sb.to do sth.)It is a wise choice for you to buy an electronic dictionary.2有几个因素(factors);他们促成了我的建议。(there be；which引导的定语从句)答案：There are several factors which lead to my suggestion.3无论你到哪里去，带着电子词典都很方便，因为它比普通(the common)字典小得多。(It isadj.for sb.to do sth.；wherever引导的地点状语从句；as引导的原因状语从句)答案：It is convenient for you to carry the electronic dictionary wherever you go as it is much smaller than the common 4在电子词典中，你会非常快地得到你所想要的。(what引导的宾语从句)答案：You can get what you want in the electronic dictionary as soon as possible.5查阅这种字典很容易。(Consulting动名词短语作主语；习语a piece of cake)答案：Consulting this kind of dictionary is really a piece of cake.6当你遇到有用的材料时，你可以尽可能多地储存下来。(when引导的时间状语从句)答案：When you meet with the useful material，you can store it as much as possible.7它能够给你生动(vivid)、清晰和正确的发音(correct pronunciation)，就像一位老师站在你的旁边。(主语谓语宾语；like)答案：It can give you a vivid，clear and correct pronunciation just like a teacher standing by you.8这让它从众多的其他字典中脱颖而出。(make it outstanding)答案：That makes it outstanding from a variety of others.9既然有这么多的优点，为什么不买一个呢？(since引导的原因状语从句；why not)答案：Since there are so many advantages，why not buy one?10真心希望我的建议会对您有用。(do强调谓语动词；主语系动词表语)答案：I do hope my suggestions will be useful to youTry to write some senior sentence patternsFill in the blanks using the correct forms of the verbs in brackets1There are several factors (lead)to my suggestion.2With the electronic dictionary (be)much smaller than the common one，it is convenient for you to carry it wherever you go.3You can get what you want in the electronic dictionary as soon as possible，consulting this kind of dictionary is really a piece of cake.for4When （meet）with the useful material，you can store it as much as possible5It can give you a vivid，clear and correct pronunciation just like a teacher standing by you，makes it outstanding from a variety of others.makes it outstanding from a variety of others is it can give you a vivid，clear and correct pronunciation just like a teacher standing by you.meetingwhichwhatthatDear_,You have asked me for my advice with regard to _,and Ill try to make the following suggestions here建议信开头常用句式建议信开头常用句式(照应材料照应材料,表明写作意图表明写作意图)1.After I read your letter(.),I am happy to know/suggest that 2.I am very glad to hear that you want to3.I know you have trouble inafter reading your letter4.I am writing to you for the purpose of 5.I am writing to share some advice/opinions with you.6.You have asked me for some advice with regard to and I will try to make some conductive suggestions.7.You have asked me for my advice about/oStep3.Form a passage and polishThebeginning In my opinion,It is wise choice for you to choose an electronic dictionary.Firstly_,Secondly _.Then _.表达建议（表达建议（body）1.I think it would be more beneficial if you could 2.I would like to suggest/recommend that3.If I were you,I would4.Why not?/How(What)about doing 5.It is a good/great idea/wise for you to do.6.You may consider doing 7.It would seem/seems to me that you could 8.In my opinion,it would be wise to take the following action.9.When it comes to such a situation,I would like to suggest that you should First,/Firstly,/Secondly,/Then,/After that,/In the end,/Finally,/Meanwhile,/Whats more,/In addition,/Besides,/Furthermore,Thebody I hope that these suggestions will be useful and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details1.I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration.2.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations practical/useful/helpful.3.I will be more than happy 4.I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions.5.I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it.6.In the end,I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.Closing sentences 结束语结束语Dear_,You have asked me for my advice with regard to _,and Ill try to make the following suggestions here.In my opinion,It is a wise for you to choice an electronic dictionary.Firstly_,Secondly _.Then _.I hope that these suggestions will be useful and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.Good luck with you/your _(祝愿祝愿).Yours sincerely Li hua 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。要点：要点：参加中文学习班；参加中文学习班；看中文书刊、电视；看中文书刊、电视；学唱中文歌曲；学唱中文歌曲；交中国朋友。交中国朋友。注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已给出。注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已给出。Dear Peter,Im glad to hear that you can ask for my advice no how to learn Chinese well._ _Best wishes,Li HuaHomework:take a Chinese coursePracticeRememberSing Chinese songMake friendsit is important to take a Chinese courseIt helps to watch TV,read book and newspapers in Chinese.it should be a good idea to sing Chinese songsYou will remember Chinese words more easily Dear Peter,Im sorry to hear that you have some problems on how to learn Chinese well.I think I can give you some useful suggestions.My suggestions are as follows.First,it is important to take a Chinese course,because youll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your classmates.Second,it also helps to watch TV and read books,newspapers in Chinese.Third,it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs,because by doing it,youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily.In addition,You can make more Chinese friends.They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try writing to me in Chinese next time.I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you.Best wishes.Li Hua