SectionB2a-3b.pptx

Unit 7 Wheres my schoolbag?writing执教者：齐继凤七台河市新兴区长兴学校Learning Goals（学习目标）1.Master key words and languages in the unit.And use them correctly.2.By writing we can develop our ability to writing.Guess(猜一猜）猜一猜）What s in my room?What Wherea dictionary A dictionary is on the desk.a schoolbaga pen boxa radiobookspensa tapeCDsA radio is on the bed.a pen box is on the desk.A tape is under the desk.Books is in the bookcase.Pens are in the pen box.CDs are under the dictioary.A schoolbag is on the chair.Where are they?Name:Deng ChaoHe wants me to show him around my room.Please help me write a letter to describe my room.（他想参观我的房间，请帮助我写一篇描述我房间的作文。）Your composition should be:1.In good handwriting (字迹工整）字迹工整）2.Neat and clean （卷面整洁）（卷面整洁）朗读文章，找出朗读文章，找出错误错误，并，并修改修改。自我欣赏与修正自我欣赏与修正 Evaluating(评价）价）1.The first letter at the beginning of a sentence（大小写）2.Spell mistakes（拼写错误）3.Grammar mistakes（语法错误）Do you like it?Can you tell me about your room,please?A bed,a desk,a chair and a bookcase are in my room.This is my bed.A jacket，a radio and a model plane are on the bed.There is a map and a picture on the wall.This is my desk.A computer,a dictionary,a pen box and some CDs are on my desk.CDs are under the dictionary.Pens are in the pen box.Books are on the bookcase.A schoolbag is on the chair.A ball is under the chair and on the floor.There is a tape under the desk.This is a bike.A hat is on the bike.Things in My RoomI have a nice room.Come and have a look.There is a bed,a desk,a chairand a bookcase in my room.Its big and I like it very The jacket is black.This isYou can see a jacket，a radioand a picture on the wall.There is a mapHere is my desk.A computer,a dictionary,a pen box and some CDs are on my desk.CDs are under the dictionary.Pens are in the pen box.Books are on the bookcase.I love them.A schoolbag is on the chair.A ball is under the chair and on the floor.my bed.much.and a model plane are on the bed.Look!There is a tape under the desk.This is a bike.A hat is on the bike.Do you like it?Can you tell me about your room,please?Differences（不同）（不同）I have a nice room.Come and have a look.There is a bed,a desk,a chair and a bookcase in my room.A bed,a desk,a chair and a bookcase are in my room.Its big and I like it very much.The jacket is black.You can see a jacket，a radioHere is my desk.A jacket，a radio and a model plane are on the bed.and a model plane on the bed.Look!This is my desk.BeginningEnding High marks in English writing（英语写作高分攻略）1.In good handwriting,neat and clean（字迹工整）2.No mistakes（无错误）3.Rich in vocabulary （用词丰富）4.Expand reasonable （拓展合理）Do you like it?Can you tell me about your room,please?Differences（不同）（不同）I have a nice room.Come and have a look.There is a bed,a desk,a chair and a bookcase in my room.A bed,a desk,a chair and a bookcase are in my room.Its big and I like it very much.The jacket is black.You can see a jacket，a radioHere is my desk.A jacket，a radio and a model plane are on the bed.and a model plane on the bed.Look!This is my desk.BeginningEnding依据评价标准提出修改意见，并修改。依据评价标准提出修改意见，并修改。Evaluating(评价）价）同伴互助同伴互助1.Is it in good handwriting,neat and clean?（是否字迹工整）2.Are there any mistakes?（是否存在错误）3.Is it rich in vocabulary?（是否用词丰富）4.Is it expand reasonable?（是否拓展合理）Rewriting（重写作文）重写作文）根据自评、互助后的修改情况，自我提升，美化文章，以“Things in My Room”为题 进行第二次写作。Do you like it?Can you tell me about your room,please?Differences（不同）（不同）I have a nice room.Come and have a look.There is a bed,a desk,a chair and a bookcase in my room.A bed,a desk,a chair and a bookcase are in my room.Its big and I like it very much.The jacket is black.You can see a jacket，a radioHere is my desk.A jacket，a radio and a model plane are on the bed.and a model plane on the bed.Look!This is my desk.BeginningEnding Write about where the things are in your room.Use the word“and,in,on,under”if you can.（写出你（写出你房间里物品的位置，尝试在句中使房间里物品的位置，尝试在句中使用用“and,in,on,under”）