广东英语高考基础写作--地点描写.ppt

Basic writingHow to describing a place?When you want to describe a place,what aspects will you write about?1Location（位置）（位置）2Area(面积）面积）3Surroundings(周边环境）周边环境）4population（人口）（人口）5History（历史）（历史）6Places of interest（名胜）（名胜）7something special（特色）（特色）8.climate（气候）（气候）1.Location(位置位置):1)lies,2)stands,3)is located/situated in,4）stretches itself lazily along2.Area(面积面积):1)covers,2)take up,3)has/with an area of,4)the size of our city is 1.Tiananmen Square,with/covering an area of,is the largest square in the world.2.Our school,which takes up 63 thousand square kilometers,is very large in size.3.Surroundings(周边环境周边环境)1)stands,2)surrounded by,3)faces4）withon its east/west/left/right5)at the back of在在的后面的后面6)in front of在在的前面的前面7)in the north of在在的北部的北部(内部内部)8)on the south of在在的南方的南方(接壤接壤)9)to the east of在在的东面的东面(相离相离)1.West of the city stands a tall building.2.Surrounded by mountains onthree sides,the small village facesa clear river on the east.4.Population(人口人口)：1)has/with a population of,2)the population of is,3)eighty percent of the population are Eighty percent of the populationhere are farmers.5.History(历史历史)1)has/with a(long)history of 2)has witnessed too much coming and going in history1.Egypt is an Arabian country with a long history.2.Built in the16th century,the castle has witnessed too much coming and going in history6.Places of interest(名胜名胜)1）The places around our city are rich in natural resources.2)The city,known as,attracts millions of visitors from all over the world.3)The city is well-known/famous forits/as4)The city is home to 5)is a must-see for tourists,as7.气候特征：气候特征：1.There is a variety of climate(warm,dry,humid,cold,sunny,stomy,rainy)2.The average temperature of Hong Kong is about 220C.The rainy season is between May and July.8.something special 特色特色 1）(The place)is famous for./The special character of(the place)is.2)You can go on the city tours to enjoy the sights,taste the local food,explore the lively nightlife and learn about its history and culture.3)Wherever you go,there are plenty of activities to choose from.汕尾市位于广东省东部，是一个有很长历汕尾市位于广东省东部，是一个有很长历史的沿海城市。总面积史的沿海城市。总面积5271平方千米，总平方千米，总人口人口359.23万人。东临万人。东临汕头汕头，西接，西接惠州市惠州市、深圳、东莞市、深圳、东莞市、广州市广州市，素有，素有“粤东桥梁粤东桥梁”之称。汕尾自然资源如矿产、森林、农之称。汕尾自然资源如矿产、森林、农产品等非常丰富，气候宜人，冬不寒冷，产品等非常丰富，气候宜人，冬不寒冷，夏不酷热。汕尾市著名的旅游胜地如夏不酷热。汕尾市著名的旅游胜地如凤山凤山祖庙祖庙Fengshan Temple旅游景区旅游景区红海湾红海湾旅旅游景区等，每年都吸引大量游客。游景区等，每年都吸引大量游客。练习：请根据以下的情景说明，使用练习：请根据以下的情景说明，使用5个规个规范的英语句子描述全部所给的信息。范的英语句子描述全部所给的信息。Lets make preparations.Useful expressions1)lies/stands,/is located/situated in/stretches itself lazily along2)coastal city covers,take up,has/with an area of,with/has a population ofeastern GuangdongClimatenatural resources farm produce Fengshan Temple,Red Bay 第一步，提取信息：第一步，提取信息：注意句子内容的完整性完整性(Completeness)Translate the following sentences:1.汕尾位于广东东部。汕尾位于广东东部。2.汕尾是一个有很长历史的沿海城市汕尾是一个有很长历史的沿海城市。3.汕尾总面积汕尾总面积5271平方千米。平方千米。4.汕尾总人口汕尾总人口360万人。万人。5.汕尾东临汕尾东临汕头汕头，西接，西接惠州市惠州市、深圳、东莞市、深圳、东莞市、广州市广州市6.素有素有“粤东桥梁粤东桥梁”之称之称7.汕尾气候宜人，冬不寒冷，夏不酷热。汕尾气候宜人，冬不寒冷，夏不酷热。8.汕尾自然资源如矿产、森林、农产品等非常丰汕尾自然资源如矿产、森林、农产品等非常丰富。富。9.汕尾市著名的旅游胜地如汕尾市著名的旅游胜地如凤山祖庙凤山祖庙Fengshan Temple旅游景区旅游景区红海湾红海湾旅游景区等，每年都吸旅游景区等，每年都吸引大量游客。引大量游客。Lets translate ten simple sentences!.1.Shanwei is located/situated/lies in the east of Guangdong province.2.It is a coastal city with a long history.3.It takes up/covers an area of 5271 square kilometers.4.It has a population of about 3600 thousand.5.with Shantou on its east and Huizhou,Shenzhen,Dongguan,Guangzhou on its west.6.it is called the“bridge of eastern Guangdong”7.The climate here is pleasant,neither too hot in summer nor too cold in winter8.It is rich in natural resources,such as mine,forest,farm produce and so on.9.Every year,the famous places of interest such as Fengshan Temple,Red Bay attracts many tourists from different places for its beautiful scenery.Analysis and Finding(分析与探究分析与探究)How to combine sentences?连句成章连句成章句子结构的正确性正确性(correctness)句子结构的复杂性复杂性(Variety)句子内容的连贯性连贯性(Coherence)Group DiscussionHow to write complex sentences?Organize the sentences:How to write complex sentences?1.汕尾位于广东东部，是一个有很长历史的沿海汕尾位于广东东部，是一个有很长历史的沿海城市。城市。1)Located in the east of Guangdong province,Shanwei is a coastal city with a long history.2)Shanwei,a coastal city in the east of Guangdong,has a long history.尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，with结构等，使文章简结构等，使文章简洁，通顺洁，通顺2.汕尾总面积汕尾总面积5271平方千米，总人口平方千米，总人口360万人。万人。It covers a total area of 5271 square kilometers with a population of about 240 thousand.巧用介词短语和巧用介词短语和with结构结构How to write complex sentences?3.汕尾东临汕尾东临汕头汕头，西接，西接惠州市惠州市、深圳、东莞市、深圳、东莞市、广州市广州市，素，素有有“粤东桥梁粤东桥梁”之称之称。With Shantou on its east and Huizhou,Shenzhen,Dongguan,Guangzhou on its west,Shanwei is also called the“bridge of eastern Guangdong”.4.汕尾气候宜人，冬不寒冷，夏不酷热，自然资汕尾气候宜人，冬不寒冷，夏不酷热，自然资源如矿产、森林、农产品等非常丰富源如矿产、森林、农产品等非常丰富。The climate here is pleasant,neither too hot in summer nor too cold in winter and it is rich in natural resources,such as mine,forest,farm produce and so on.How to write complex sentences?巧用连词，如巧用连词，如and，用好并列句，用好并列句5.汕尾市著名的旅游胜地如汕尾市著名的旅游胜地如凤山祖庙凤山祖庙Fengshan Temple旅游景区旅游景区红海湾红海湾旅游景区旅游景区等，每年都吸引大量游客。等，每年都吸引大量游客。There are many famous places of interest,among which is the Fengshan Temple,Red Bay whose scenery is very beautiful,attracts lots of tourists from different places every year.How to write complex sentences?尽量用复合句尽量用复合句,倒装倒装,状语从句，状语从句，there be句型等。句型等。Exchange your composition with your desk mate and help each other to improve your writing.Dont forget your homework:Dont forget your homework:Improve your writing in your composition book.Located in the east of Guangdong province,Shanwei is a coastal city with a long history.It covers a total area of 5271 square kilometers with a population of about 240 thousand.With Shantou on its east and Huizhou,Shenzhen,Dongguan,Guangzhou on its west,Shanwei is also called the“bridge of eastern Guangdong”.The climate here is pleasant,neither too hot in summer nor too cold in winter and it is rich in natural resources,such as mine,forest,farm produce and so on.There are many famous places of interest,among which is the Fengshan Temple,Red Bay whose scenery is very beautiful,attracts lots of tourists from different places every year.Conclusion课型:写作课教学目标:通过这节的讲授,让学生掌握如何用英语描写地点.重点:讲授描写地点的常用词汇及句型.难点:灵活运用所学词汇及句型写一篇短文.教学方法:归纳演绎法澳大利亚位于最小的大洲澳大利亚位于最小的大洲大大洋洲洋洲,是世界第六大国家。它是世界第六大国家。它是一个干旱气候为主的国家，是一个干旱气候为主的国家，只有少部分沿海地区有充足的只有少部分沿海地区有充足的雨量。它由六个州组成，其中雨量。它由六个州组成，其中墨尔本和悉尼是最大的两个城墨尔本和悉尼是最大的两个城市。它以明媚的阳光，数不清市。它以明媚的阳光，数不清的牛羊和奇特的野生动植物而的牛羊和奇特的野生动植物而著名，世界各地的游客来到这著名，世界各地的游客来到这里体验它独特的美景。里体验它独特的美景。总面积：总面积：7，686，850km2 人人口：约：口：约：2，000万万 写作要求写作要求 1.1.只能使用只能使用5 5个句子表达个句子表达全部的内容。全部的内容。2.2.介绍必须包括所有内容介绍必须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐条译成要点，但不要逐条译成英语。英语。3.3.要有标题。要有标题。写作内容：写作内容：Homework Australia Located in the smallest continentOceania,Australia is the sixth largest country in the world.It covers a total area of7,686,850square kilometers with a population of about 20 million.It is a mainly dry country and only a few coastal areas have plenty of rainfall.Whats more,It is made up of 6 states,in which Melbourne and Sydney are the largest cities.Because it is famous for its bright sunshine,countless sheep and cattle and its unique wildlife,the tourists from all over the world come to enjoy its scenery.