2019高中英语 Unit 3 Celebration Section Ⅶ Writing——描述事件学案 北师大版必修1.doc

1SectionSection WritingWriting描述事件描述事件写作技法指导文体指导1人称描述事件时一般以第一或第三人称角度来叙述。用第一人称表示由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻，它的优点在于能把事件的情节通过“我”来传达给读者，使人读后感到真实可信，如身临其境。用第三人称叙述的优势在于描述事件时不受活动范围的限制，而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者，直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前，使文章的客观性更强。2时态和顺序描述已经发生的事件，其基本时态为一般过去时。在描述事件时，我们可以采用顺叙、倒叙、插叙三种叙述方式。3过渡过渡在文章中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用，往往会用在地点转移，时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述上。4叙述与对话引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是描述事件时提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述，可以更客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态，从而使文章生动、有趣，内容更加充实、具体。5基本要领头绪分明，脉络清晰。突出重点，详略得当。语言活泼，准确生动。亮点句式1We had an opening ceremony in which our headmaster announced the start of the.我们举行了开幕式，校长宣布开始。2The next day，we had an English Karaoke Contest in the morning，which attracted those who love to sing English songs to show their talents.第二天早晨，我们举办了英语卡拉 OK 大赛，吸引了许多爱好音乐的同学来秀才艺。3You can't imagine how wonderful the contest is.你无法想象这次比赛有多么好。24What attracted us most was the English Word Contest，which let us realize the pleasure of memorizing words.最吸引我们的是英语单词大赛，让我们认识到了记忆单词的乐趣。5We benefited a lot from the activity，which not only enriched our school life but also made us more interested in English.这次活动让我们受益很多，不仅丰富了我们的校园生活，而且让我们对英语更感兴趣了。写作任务假定你是李明，去年曾赴美国加州帕萨迪那市的一所中学进行短期参观访问，住在Peter 家。今年寒假 Peter 要来北京，将住在你家。请根据下列信息给 Peter 发一封电子邮件。内容到京到机场接机，举办欢迎家宴参观长城等名胜古迹到现场欣赏中国民乐新年音乐会活动游览繁华市区、购物希望如行程允许，在北京过春节注意：1词数 100 左右；2可适当增加细节，以便行文连贯。审题谋篇体裁记叙文时态一般将来时为主主题活动安排人称第三人称为主结构首段：提出写信目的；第二段：活动安排；第三段：期盼。遣词造句.对接单元词汇1honored adj. 感到荣幸的2traditional adj. 传统的3be known as 作为而出名4make.feel at home 让感觉在家一样5show.around 领某人参观.巧用单元句式、语法(一)完成句子1. 很高兴知道你不久就要来北京。Glad to learn you're coming to Beijing in a couple of days.2我们很荣幸你在北京期间和我们待在一起。3We feel honored you can stay with us while you are in Beijing.3我相信我们会玩得很高兴。I believe we will have much fun together.(二)句式升级1We are so glad you can stay with us.You are in Beijing.(用时间状语从句合并句子)We are so glad you can stay with us while you are in Beijing.2We have got everything ready for you.It will make you feel at home.(用 so as to 合并句子)We have got everything ready for you so as to make you feel at home.3You will like all the delicious Chinese food.I'm sure about it.(用宾语从句合并句子)I'm sure you will like all the delicious Chinese food. 4Tian'anmen Square is a scenic spot.We can't miss it.(用定语从句合并句子)Tian'anmen Square is a scenic spot we can't miss.妙笔成篇【参考范文】November 26th，2019Hi! It's Li Ming here.Glad to learn you're coming to Beijing in a couple of days.My family and I are looking forward to your visit and we feel honored you can stay with us while you are in Beijing.We have got everything ready for you so as to make you feel at home.On the day you arrive，my father and I will meet you at the airport and in the evening we will have a nice dinner party at home.I'm sure you will like all the traditional Chinese food.During the following days，I will show you around many places of interest in Beijing，including the Great Wall，which is known as one of the seven wonders of the world.And Tian'anmen Square is a scenic spot we can't miss.I believe we will have much fun together.Well，see you soon.Bye!4Yours，Li Ming