高中英语作文写作教学课件公开课(活动安排).ppt

What makes a good essay?英语作文写作英语作文写作基础写作中存在的主要问题及分析基础写作中存在的主要问题及分析1.话题词汇、短语错误话题词汇、短语错误2.词汇、短语、句型贫乏词汇、短语、句型贫乏3.句子语法错误句子语法错误4.连贯性差连贯性差积累少积累少语法不扎实篇章意识不足考场作文考场作文TIPS1.取悦评卷人取悦评卷人:有清晰的整体脉络有清晰的整体脉络,有自然的段间衔接有自然的段间衔接.经典的用词用句经典的用词用句,有整齐美观的书写有整齐美观的书写.2.经典的用句：经典的用句：感叹句，倒装、强调、虚拟、省略句、定感叹句，倒装、强调、虚拟、省略句、定 语从句，名词性从句，语从句，名词性从句，名人名言名人名言。写作基本步骤写作基本步骤1.仔细审题，列举大纲。仔细审题，列举大纲。2围绕要点，写出句子。围绕要点，写出句子。3.添加过度，确保连贯。添加过度，确保连贯。4.先求正确，再求灵活。先求正确，再求灵活。5.认真眷写，卷面整洁。认真眷写，卷面整洁。近近3年基础写作分析年基础写作分析活动安排活动安排地点介绍地点介绍基础写作之基础写作之 活动安排活动安排学校学生会准备举行一次以环保为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据学校学生会准备举行一次以环保为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下内容写一个书面通知以下内容写一个书面通知,欢迎大家积极参与。欢迎大家积极参与。写作内容写作内容 Notice .The students Union 典型例题：典型例题：Notice .The students Union 认真审题认真审题学校学生会准备举行一次以环保为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你学校学生会准备举行一次以环保为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下内容写一个书面通知根据以下内容写一个书面通知,欢迎大家积极参与。欢迎大家积极参与。写作内容写作内容一般将来时一般将来时1.时态：时态：2.信息重组：信息重组：1.学生会将要举办一次英语演讲比赛。目的：增长环保知学生会将要举办一次英语演讲比赛。目的：增长环保知识和提高英语口语。主题：识和提高英语口语。主题：“保护环境保护环境,节约能源节约能源”。2.比赛时间比赛时间：6月月5日星期五日星期五4:00-5：30。比赛地点：教学。比赛地点：教学楼五楼演讲大厅。楼五楼演讲大厅。3.报名时间：报名时间：5月月25日前。报名方式：日前。报名方式：studentcenter 。4.评奖：一等奖评奖：一等奖3名名,二等奖二等奖6名名,三等奖三等奖12名。名。5.欢迎大家积极参与。欢迎大家积极参与。信息重组信息重组本节课的目标本节课的目标学习与这一话题学习与这一话题 相关的词句相关的词句举办举办 _增加增加/丰富丰富 _知识知识 _提高提高 _学生会学生会 _参加参加 _保护保护 _环境环境 _口语口语 _英语演讲比赛英语演讲比赛_ 主题主题 n _节约节约 vt _能源能源 n _报名报名 _相关词汇默写相关词汇默写hold/organize increase/enrichknowledgeimprove(vt)The Students Uniontake part in/participate inprotect(vt)protection(n)environment (n)environmental (adj)spoken English/oral English English-speaking contestthemesaveenergysign up(1)增长环保知识：增长环保知识：_(2)举办一次比赛：举办一次比赛：_(3)保护环境：保护环境：_(4)节约能源：节约能源：_(5)表示目的的短语：表示目的的短语：_ enrich/increase our knowledge about the environment hold/organize a contestprotect our environmentsave energythe purpose of./with the aim of.in order to./with词语翻译词语翻译(6)在在6月月5日星期五下午日星期五下午4:00-5:30：_ 4:00 p.m._5:30 p.m.,_ Friday June 5th(7)教学楼：教学楼：_ (8)在五楼：在五楼：_ the 5th floor(9)演讲大厅：演讲大厅：_onfromteaching/classroom buildingtoon the lecture hall词语翻译词语翻译(10)参加比赛的人：参加比赛的人：_(11)在在5月月25日前：日前：_ May 25th(12)在上：在上：those who want toparticipate in the contestbeforeat词语翻译词语翻译(13)三个一等奖：三个一等奖：_(14)欢迎参加：欢迎参加：_ three first prizesYou are welcome to be there./Welcome to join us.词语翻译词语翻译句子翻译句子翻译1.学生会将要举办一次英语演讲比赛。目的：增长环保知学生会将要举办一次英语演讲比赛。目的：增长环保知识和提高英语口语。主题：识和提高英语口语。主题：“保护环境保护环境,节约能源节约能源”。2.比赛时间：比赛时间：6月月5日星期五日星期五4:00-5：30。比赛地点：教学。比赛地点：教学楼五楼演讲大厅。楼五楼演讲大厅。3.报名时间：报名时间：5月月25日前。报名方式：日前。报名方式：studentcenter 。4.评奖：一等奖评奖：一等奖3名名,二等奖二等奖6名名,三等奖三等奖12名。名。5.欢迎大家积极参与。欢迎大家积极参与。句句1：学生会将要举办一次英语演讲比赛。目的：学生会将要举办一次英语演讲比赛。目的：增长环保知识和提高英语口语。主题：增长环保知识和提高英语口语。主题：“保护环保护环境境,节约能源节约能源”。The Students Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest to increase our knowledge about the environment and improve our spoken English.The theme is:“Protect our environment and save our energy”.适当调整适当调整更加顺畅更加顺畅句子句子1 翻译翻译合并：合并：In order to increase our knowledge about the environment and improve our spoken English,the Students Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest,the theme of which/whose theme is:“Protect our environment and save our energy”.(定定语从句语从句)合并句子合并句子句句2.比赛时间：比赛时间：6月月5日星期五日星期五4:00-5：30。比赛。比赛地点：教学楼五楼演讲大厅。地点：教学楼五楼演讲大厅。The contest will be held in the Lecture Hall on the 5th floor in the classroom building from 4:00 p.m.to 5:30 p.m.,on Friday June 5th.先地点，先地点，后时间后时间由小到大由小到大句子句子2 翻译翻译句句3.报名时间：报名时间：5月月25日前。报名方式：日前。报名方式：studentcenter 。If you want to participate in the contest,you should sign up at studentcenter before May 25th.中文没有主语中文没有主语时：要补充主时：要补充主语再翻译。语再翻译。句子句子3 翻译翻译句句4：奖项：奖项：3个一等奖个一等奖,6个二等奖和个二等奖和12个三等奖。个三等奖。There are three first prizes,six second and twelve third ones.句句5.希望大家积极参与比赛。希望大家积极参与比赛。Anyone is warmly welcome to be there.句子句子4、5 翻译翻译1.To increase our knowledge about the environment and improve our spoken English,the Students Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest,the theme of which is:“Protect our environment and save our energy”.2.The contest will be held in the Lecture Hall on the 5th floor in the classroom building from 4:00 p.m.to 5:30 p.m.,on Friday June 5th.3.If you want to participate in the contest,you should sign up at at studentcenter before May 25th.4.There are three first prizes,six second and twelve third ones.5.Anyone is warmly welcome to take part in it.连句成篇连句成篇Those whoare supposed toitLots of prizes will be delivered for the contest,includingNotice To increase our knowledge about the environment and improve our spoken English，the Students Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest,the theme of which is:“Protect our environment and save our energy”The contest will be held in the Lecture Hall on the 5th floor in the classroom building from 4:00 p.m.to 5:30 p.m.,on Friday June 5th.Those who want to participate in the contest are supposed to sign up at studentcenter before May 25th.Lots of prizes will be delivered for the contest,including three first prizes,six second and twelve third ones.Dear fellow schoolmates,you are warmly welcome to be there and thanks for your participation.The Students UnionPractice 怎样使用丰富的句式和高级词汇怎样使用丰富的句式和高级词汇1.To his surprise,the little girl knows so many things.(使用名词性从句）使用名词性从句）2.Though Im weak,Ill make the effort.(使用倒使用倒装句装句)What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.Weak as I am,Ill make the effort.3.I wont believe what he says.(no matter what状状语从句）语从句）4.They sang and laughed as they went back to school.(使用使用V-ing形式）形式）5.We all think he is a great man.(think highly of)No matter what he says,I wont believe.Singing and laughing,they went back to schoolWe all think highly of him.Practice 怎样使用丰富的句式和高级词汇怎样使用丰富的句式和高级词汇