雅思写作讲座(新航道)lesson 6.ppt

IELTS WRITINGLesson Nine:小作文2饼状图Pie Chart的审题过程：1.看文字信息2.标题审题 标1233.极端数据及其周围（与之接近）数据4.一般数据5.落单数据 TASK I 1.每个饼块在两个饼中排名第？占？%2.分类说：左饼到右饼 上升/下降/保持不变3.每段中具体描写每个饼块，突出特点4.写完要素后将两个饼的数量比较一下 *若两个饼的总量有不同，需要交代一下5.学会丰富百分比的表达和“占”的表达。不要一直用数字加百分比的格式，如25%。特定的数字可以采取多样性的表达，如25%=a quarter of,50%=half of,50%=a,or the majority of TASK I:两个饼 TASK I“占据”的讲法：A占了数据的百分比 occupyconstitutemake up the rest the remainder TASK I1.A占了数据的百分比2.THERE BE3.数据做主语4.The percentage of is%.饼图的三句万能句型饼图的三句万能句型:1.数据+抄题+导入宾语 Band 52.主语+“占据”（先特征，后数据）Band 63.剩余数据 Band 7解决方案：1.把相同的属性的柱状用线条勾画出来。以线状图或者是饼状图的方法来写。2.完成两维分析。TASK I:柱状图1.将相同属性的柱子顶端连接起来2.若横坐标是数字轴或时间轴，按曲线图写，否则按饼状图写法写P63TASK I:柱状图The graph shows the changing patterns in commuting by train,car,tube or bus for commuters in London in the years 1960,1980 and 2000.The number of people using trains at first rose from just under 20%in 1960 to about 28%in 1980,but then fell back to about 23%in 2000.Use of the tube has been relatively stable,falling from around 27%of commuters in 1960 to 22%in 1980,but climbing back to reach 25%by 2000.On the other hand,the use of cars increased steadily from just over 5%in 1960 to 23%in 1980,reaching almost 40%by 2000,whereas the popularity of buses has declined since 1960,falling from just under 35%in 1960 to 27%in 1980 and only 15%in 2000.TASK I表格题审题顺序：确定写作顺序（横？纵？）表格审题编号先趋势，后数据先趋势，后数据n在表格左边空白区域标上trendn写出all trends那句话（总分句）2 minn在表格右边空白区域进行数据方法的编号 2-3 minn进行数据的描写 10 min TASK ITABLE1.表格的描述顺序是以时间（趋势）时间（趋势）作为主线，非时间作为辅线2.极端数字举例法3.范围法4.平均值举例法5.类比法6.反比法 TASK I类比的四种句型：类比的四种句型：1.This was the similar case with2.This was true of 3.So did4.This can be paralleled with 反比的三种句型：反比的三种句型：1.This was the opposite with2.This was converse with 3.This was contrary to 表格图 The table below shows the results of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club think about the clubs activities,facilities and opening hours.oThe table compares the opinions of male and female club members about the services provided by a city sports club.oWe can see from the responses that the male members are generally happy or satisfied with the range of activities at the club,with only 5%dissatisfied.In contrast,however,only about two-thirds of female members were positive about the activity range and almost a third were dissatisfied.The genders were more in agreement about the club facilities.Only 14%of women and 10%of men were unhappy with these,and the majority(64 and 63%respectively)was very positive.Finally,the female respondents were much happier with the club opening hours than their male counterparts.Almost three-quarters of them were very satisfied with these and only 3%were unhappy,whereas nearly 40%of the men expressed their dissatisfaction.oOverall,the table indicates that female members are most unhappy with the range of activities,while male members feel that opening hours are the least satisfactory aspect of the club.The table compares the opinions of male and female club members about the services provided by a city sports club.We can see from the responses that the male members are generally happy or satisfied with the range of activities at the club,with only 5%dissatisfied.In contrast,however,only about two-thirds of female members were positive about the activity range and almost a third were dissatisfied.The genders were more in agreement about the club facilities.Only 14%of women and 10%of men were unhappy with these,and the majority(64 and 63%respectively)was very positive.Finally,the female respondents were much happier with the club opening hours than their male counterparts.Almost three-quarters of them were very satisfied with these and only 3%were unhappy,whereas nearly 40%of the men expressed their dissatisfaction.Overall,the table indicates that female members are most unhappy with the range of activities,while male members feel that opening hours are the least satisfactory aspect of the club.TASK I:混合图混合图WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The two pie charts show the proportion young men and young women went to Gym and the bar chart below shows how often they did in London last year.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.You should write at least 150 words.TASK I We can see the proportion of young men and young women went to Gym from the two pie charts and the bar chart shows how many times they went there last year.In general,females went to Gym less frequently than males and exercised mostly twice in a week.The pie chart shows that about two third of the male population went to Gym last year,while only less than half of the female population went there.The highest percentage of women who went to Gym was approximately 33%,was for twice in a week.However,this percentage was less than the percentage of males went to Gym,which was approximately 42%.Males worked out themselves more commonly for once a day,which constituted just over 23%,3 times in a week(about 12%),once in week(approximately 10%)and twice in a day(6%).Females went to Gym more commonly than males were for 3 times in a week(21%)and once in week(18%).Seven per cent of men and about 14%of women seldom went to Gym.TASK IWRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.In June 1996,an experimental flu vaccine was trailed in a large country town on females only.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.You should write at least 150 words.TASK I TASK I TASK I The figure show data for a flu epidemic which hit a large country town in 1996.Figure 1 gives the number of persons who died and Figure 2 gives the number of cases of flu before and during the epidemic.In Figure 1 it can be seen that the flu was responsible for the deaths of 2 females but no males in the period from March to May.However,from June to August,there were 4 female deaths and 1 male death.From Figure 2 it is clear that the new vaccine had a positive effect on the number of new cases of flu reported in females.There were just over 1000 cases reported in May,climbing rapidly to a peak of 3500 in July.Thereafter,the number of cases dropped slowly to about 2800 in September,before leveling off at 2500 for the rest of the year.For males,the figures were lower but showed a similar trend throughout the epidemic.