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1、【精品文档】如有侵权,请联系网站删除,仅供学习与交流雅思作文.精品文档.Topic:Should criminals be sent to prison or should they do something else as a punishment? Explain your opinion and give your reasons.参考思路、词汇、句子sent to a jail:The world would be in great chaos and full of blood and violence. It is the best deterrent to crime. They
2、 will think twice before they commit a crime. The decline of crime has a direct correlation with the implementation of the practice. It serves a just reward for the heartless and merciless malefactors while a great spiritual comfort to the victims family. The abolition of the practice will send out
3、a misleading message that anyone can kill and get away with it.I am in favor of the former view that we should retain the time-honored catholicon to ensure a safe and comfortable living environment to all these law-abiding citizens. An old saying best expresses my attitude:“Mercy to the criminal man
4、y be cruelty to the people.”make up for, dangerousIt is hard to guarantee that they have really repented of their crimes. If it turns out (结果发现) that they just pretend they repent and start anew and actually they commit crimes again, the loss and the damage to the victims will be irreparable. And al
5、so, if the police want the behaviour of the criminals to be under control, they have to spend money and time in supervising the criminals after they are set free. Furthermore, once the criminals commit crimes again, it will take the police much trouble to catch them.It is a great deterrence for many
6、 potential criminals. Compared with the deprivation of freedom, letting the criminals do something else as punishment is too mild.It makes the violent robber think twice before pulling the trigger(扣动扳机).Otherwise, it will send out a misleading message that anyone can kill and get away with(逃脱处罚)it.d
7、o something else:economical, lessen the prison crowding and thus cut down on government budget,The practice of sending criminals to jail can not scare off the would-be criminals. Up to now, there is no evidence showing the direct correlation between the practice and the decline of crime. We should o
8、ffer the offender a chance to mend his way and take over a new life.Anyone who is guilty of a crime, offender, criminal, killers and rapists, malefactor, villain, evildoerThe imprisonment has a limited role to play in eliminating crimes.be unsociable and lack working skills, ignorance of the new kno
9、wledge, cannot survive in the brand new society, which changes and develops everydayshare their criminal experiencereclamation, reclaimout of pulse(出于冲动), regret, be not born evilIf given an opportunity to remedy their faults, they would appreciate and cherish it.They would not feel discriminated or
10、 exclusive by society.A类的雅思大作文大致可以分为教育,社会,科技,政府政策,大众媒体,法律和犯罪这么六大类的题目,而其中学生们普遍反映最怵的,感觉最无从下手的题目当属法律与犯罪类型的题目。截至到目前为止(08年12月22日),在08年的1月12日,8月16日以及10月11日的考试均出现了法律,犯罪的题目。虽然说出题频率相对来说并不是非常的频繁,但是如果学生在备考中没有进行合理有效的对此类话题具有针对性的总结和复习的话,相信很难在写作中取得什么理想的分数(参加了这几次考试中济南朗阁的学员的分数普遍不是非常的理想)。而纵观市面上大量的雅思写作指导,烤鸭备考秘笈这些针对不同层
11、次,不同水平的学生而编辑的雅思丛书中,我们也很难看到针对犯罪这类题目的一些教学及复习指导。在此篇论文中,我将就法律与犯罪所涉及的一些常见话题给大家从其内容,语言逐一进行分析,希望雅思教师们或者烤鸭们能够从中受益。一、是否应该有死刑?- Can capital punishment (death penalty) ever be justified?这个题目可以说是一谈到法律犯罪这一大类话题时,最会经常谈到的问题。对于大多数中国雅思考生,尤其是高中生,大学生,如果没有事先经过精心准备的话,对这个题目恐怕只能是傻眼了。关于这个话题,大致可以分成以下这几个分论点来展开:一方:Arguments ag
12、ainst capital punishment:死刑只是对罪犯的一种处罚,而并不能够将犯罪行为中受害者生命挽回,或者赔偿其所遭受的伤害Capital punishment, which even though manages to bring the criminals to justice, could by no means compensate for physical, mental and psychologicalsufferings inflicted on victims, or in some extreme cases, bring back their lives.无论
13、一个人犯多大的错误,其他人都无权剥夺其生命。(人权)It is entirely unjustified to deprive one of his/her rights to live regardless of how insanely severe and cruel the offenses he/she has committed are. (This subject matter has boiled to the controversialissue of human rights)死刑犯的尸体的处理(是否可以用于器官移植等等)将是一个非常具有争议的道德问题。How the bo
14、dy of the deceased criminal is going to be disposed of (used for organ transplant, for instance) will be bound to raise grave both ethical and social implications.另一方:Arguments for capital punishment:如果死刑犯没有受到最为严厉的惩罚,那么这对受害者是不公平的。It would be only fair for the victims if the criminals are subject to
15、the greatest fear of all- death.如果死刑取消的话,那么很多潜在的罪犯就不会顾忌做出一些极为可怕的犯罪行为。If capital punishment is ever to be done away with, the potential wrong-doers wouldnt be deterredfrom committing staggeringly serious offenses among which serial murder proves particularly appalling. 二、罪犯是否应该被送进监狱?- Should criminal
16、s be sent to prisons or receive job training and education instead?类似的题目之前曾经考过,而在08年的1月12日再次出现。对于这个题目,很多学生会非常容易的陷入一个陷阱(pitfall),那就是认为说如果让学生接受教育或就业培训的话,那就是等同于有充分的人身自由了。其实不然,这里的教育或就业培训并不代表说把囚犯与普通的学生或接受培训者一样等同的对待,而是一样的要限制他们的自由,只不过说不像在监狱里整天关在牢房里无所事事,而是要接受教育和培训。关于这个题目,其实就变成了一个两者之间的对比,可以从以下几个方面进行论述。一方:Arg
17、uments for prison:来源:考试大监狱同教育或就业培训相比有很强的阻吓作用,这样可以有效的抑制犯罪率的上升。In stark contrast to placing criminals on educational courses or employment retraining, prisons appeared more effectivein deterring potential, would-be wrongdoers from committing crimes, thus drastically decreasing the likelihood of rising
18、 crime rate.监狱更多的对罪犯来说是一种惩罚,因此能够避免再犯。Being locked up behind the bars is a punitive measure imposed on criminals who are highly unlikely to turn into a recidivist in consideration of their fear of setting foot into jailsever again.另一方:Arguments for education and job retraining罪犯在监狱里所被包围的是一群囚犯,这对罪犯的改造
19、不是好的,反而是不好的影响。接受教育可以让罪犯在一个积极的环境里,真正的意识到对与错。“Captivity of negativity” is a terminology intended to describe the destructive, rather than constructive impact on criminals who are locked up in prison, surrounded by people who probably have committed even more serious charges. Education serves to correc
20、t any misconception or eliminate twistedthoughts they have by immersing them in a positive environment.大多数罪犯往往是没有什么文化知识和生存技能,出狱后通常很难找到工作。教育和就业培训能够让他们在日后的生活中靠自己生存下去,而不至于因为没有收入来源而再次误入歧途。A significant proportion of criminals are sadly illiterate without adequate fundamental knowledge and survival skill
21、s and it wouldnt be easy for them to find a decent job after being released from the jail. With convenient access to education and job retraining, they are able to survive by themselves, greatly reducing the chance of becoming a recidivistin times when they are financially challenged.三、个人选择与法制社会的冲突-
22、 Should individual choices interfere with the society that is based on rules and laws这是08年10月11号的考题,这道题目主要讨论的核心是一种矛盾。那就是社会始终是以法规和法律为基础的,而有时社会的利益往往是与个人的选择相矛盾的。当这种矛盾发生时,应该将哪一个放在首位?为什么?这次考试结束后,我曾经与几个参与考试的学生讨论过,很多学生的反映就是这个题目其实并不难,但就是不知道如何下手。还有某位学生直接就举了一个我们不能随便杀人,因为这是违反法律的事情的这样一个例子。其实,这个题目最为关键的是两点:如何去法律的
23、范围还有就是要找到一个合适法律与个人选择发生冲突的这么一个结合点。我对这个题目的段落结构以及内容的理解如下:这种矛盾的产生主要是因为法律法规是从大众和国家的利益出发,而个人利益则绝大多数情况下是站在个人角度考虑问题的。一个有利于个人的问题如果给其他人造成了无谓的伤害,则是不应该允许的。The conflict of public interest and personal interest accounts largely for the issue of the extent to which is the interferenceof personal choices justified
24、with the society governed by rules and laws.这里我们可以举一个例子,就知识产权(Intellectual Property Rights).很多人都会去网络上下载免费电影,音乐以及电子书。这样做的原因就是正版(authentic copy)相对中国消费者来说太贵。虽然说这看起来合情合理,大多数人都会从中受益,但是这也同时伤害到了娱乐明星们(celebrities)和唱片公司的利益,所以这时候应该以法律为根本,杜绝这种行为。反过来说,我们不可否认个别特别情况下法律也应该给正当的个人选择让步On the other hand, rules and law
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