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1、托福写作的经常扣分点在托福写作考试中,考生想要写出一篇精彩出色的作文,那么你的托福作文中就需要避免一些扣分点。今天小编给大家带来了托福写作的经常扣分点,希望能够帮助到大家,下面小编就和大家分享,来欣赏一下吧。托福写作的经常扣分点扣分一: 照抄题目,照搬原文例如有道题的题目是“ Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children can benefit in important ways from taking care of a pet animal.”,然后考生的第一句话就直接复制粘贴了,考生的第一句话是:”For
2、the question if I agree or disagree with the following statement? Children can benefit in important ways from taking care of a pet animal. Well, as far as I am concerned.”这种明显的凑字数,不改动句子,连最基本的同义词互换都没有做到。这种很容易让考官降低读文章的兴趣,使得分数不够理想。考生可以使用例如“When it comes to the issue about , as far as I am concerned”。这样
3、会大大提高考官好感度。扣分二: 论据根本不能证明自己的观点例如,在写官方真题Official28的独立题(Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents today are more involved in their children s education than parents were in the past.)时候,第一段是这么写的:“孩子的教育受到重视,孩子的将来也取决于他们的表现,家长们很关心孩子的教育。因此我同意现在的家长比从前更重视参与到孩子的教育中去了。大家看到这感觉到问题的所在了么,这位考生一
4、直在说“现在孩子的教育受到家长重视”,然而这并不能证明“现在的家长比从前更 加重视参与到孩子的教育中去了”。一定要切题,紧抓主题,不能以为写很多,或者用的关键词多就证明紧抓主旨。扣分三: 假大空的废话一大堆假大空的废话容易让考官觉得故意凑字数,读完没人有人思考,如同嚼蜡。无论是描述一件事情有多么深远的意义,还是描述一个东西有多么有意思,总是反复不停地说:“这个事情有意义是因为这是多么有意义的一件事”“这个东西是多么的有趣是因为这是一个多么有趣的东西”。因此,如果说明某事有意义,应该说 “这个东西多么的有趣是因为有一次我带着这个东西出去玩然后”这种顺序才能让考官感同身受。扣分四: 跑题例如,一个
5、考生的托福作文中题目是这样的,“Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.”然后该考生在作文中大致思路如是写道:“Always telling the truth”是不理性的,而他认为我们应该做一个理性的人,他自己是理工科的学生,他觉得理工科的学生更为理性,而文科的学生总是不那么理性然后就没有然后了,这种是考生经常犯的错误,刚开始是正在主
6、题中,中途一遇到自己擅长的部分,就开始无线扩展,导致很难回到主题上来,加上时间限制,就草草生硬的加了结尾。扣分五: 自相矛盾出现这个情况的考生,和跑题的考生的文章有着“相通之处”,跑题的考生是要么一开始就跑偏,要么半路跑偏。而自相矛盾的考生呢,不是举例子写着写着不知道怎么就矛盾了,就是写到后来写得自相矛盾了的。例如这题:“Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People today spend too much time on personal enjoymentdoing things they like to dor
7、ather than doing things they should do.”。有一位童鞋的作文里面,开头写自己“同意人们现在花太多时间在个人娱乐上”,并且说的也有理有据,说现在的人就知道打游戏等,结果写到后面,就写成了现在的人工作压力太大,家庭压力也很大,很多时间都花在了工作、家庭上,很少有时间能娱乐这种自相矛盾的很容易在写完后检查时发现,由于时间关系,要么放弃,要么慌忙改正,导致文章结构松散。只要考试注意上面这五个扣分点,那么对你的托福写作考试的提高一定会有帮助,我们在平时的练习中也该注意这些方面,对自己高要求,才可再托福写作中发挥出很好的水平。最后,小编预祝大家托福考试能取得理想的成绩
8、。托福PPTest2语法题笔记篇41. In a barter economy, a person having something to trade must make contact with another person _ and has something acceptable to offer in exchange.A. and who wants itB. wants itC. who wants itD. who does it want答案:C分析及考点:定语从句。A中and多余。B缺连接词。D词序颠倒。参考译文:在易物交换的体系中,有东西想做交易的人必须跟另一个想要这东西
9、并能在交易中提供可接受物品的人接触。42. The chief justice of the United States is the countrys _ and is appointed by the President with the approval of the Senate.A. judicial officer highestB. officer judicial highestC. officer highest judicialD. highest judicial officer答案:D分析及考点:形容词顺序的考察。因为中心词是officer,所以ABC都错。参考译文:美
10、国的首席法官是国家最高的司法官员,并在参议院批准下由总统任命。43. Including land and water, the state of Alaska _ an area of 1,530,700 square kilometers, equal to about one-sixth of the size of the United States.A. havingB. where there isC. which isD. has答案:D分析及考点:句子缺谓语。不构成从句。参考译文:包括土地和水域,阿拉斯加州有1530700平方公里面积,相当于1/6美国的大小。44. _ unt
11、il the twelfth century that the magnetic compass was used for navigation.A. Its not beingB. It was notC. NotD. Was not答案:B分析及考点:强调句型。It was that 参考译文:直到20世纪,磁性指南针才被用于航行。45. Although she wrote only two short novels and 19 stories during her brief career, Flannery OConnor made _ to United States ficti
12、on.A. a contribution is importantB. an important contributionC. a contribution and importantD. is an important contribution答案:B分析及考点:动词make的用法,make 直接加宾语。参考译文:尽管Flannery OConnor在她短暂的职业生涯中只写了2部短篇小说和19个故事,但她对美国的小说作出了重要的贡献。46. The New York City Ballet has been _ of United States classical ballet compan
13、ies since its inception in 1946.A. the consistently creative mostB. consistently creative the mostC. most creative the consistentlyD. the most consistently creative答案:D分析及考点:形容词词序问题。中心词是creative。参考译文:纽约城市芭蕾是从1946年芭蕾起始后的美国传统芭蕾舞公司中最一贯的继承芭蕾舞艺术的。47. When condensation occurs close to the ground, _ result
14、s in fog or dew.A. orB. theC. itD. then答案:C分析及考点:主句缺主语参考译文:当水蒸气在离地面很近的地方凝结的时候,就形成了雾或露水。48. Desktop publishing systems are capable of _ camera-ready pages made up of text and graphics, with text set in different typefaces and sizes.A. when producingB. produceC. to produceD. producing答案:D分析及考点:介词后面跟动名
15、词。be capable of doing sth也是固定搭配。参考译文:桌面印刷系统能够生产出由文本和图形混合在一起的现成的照相机成像相片,文本还可以设置不同的字体和大小。49. The femur is the _ in the body.A. bone is the largest and longestB. largest and the longest bone thatC. largest and longest boneD. bone largest and longest and答案:C分析及考点:词序问题。中心词是bone。参考译文:大腿骨是身体中最大和最长的骨头。50. S
16、purred by the phenomenal growth of the city of Chicago after the Civil War, Illinois became _.A. that a major industrial stateB. to a major industrial stateC. a major industrial stateD. to be a major industrial state答案:C分析及考点:及物动词become的用法,直接加名词宾语。参考译文:受内战以后芝加哥城市显著发展的激励,Illinois州成为一个主要的工业州。51. _ fro
17、m the Caribbean islands explored the area now known as Texas and New Mexico as early as the sixteenth century.A. Spaniards whoB. As SpaniardsC. When SpaniardsD. Spaniards答案:D分析及考点:主句句子缺主语。参考译文:来自加勒比海群岛的西班牙人早在16世纪就开始开发现在众所周知的德州和新墨西哥州。52. If volcanoes erupt explosively and cast fluid lava high into th
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