续写-海上营救.ppt
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1、2019 2019 稽阳联考读后续写稽阳联考读后续写年份年份体裁体裁 主题主题细节描写特点细节描写特点年份年份体裁体裁 主题主题细节描写特点细节描写特点2016.10记叙文Jane 和丈夫在野营时吵架走散和丈夫在野营时吵架走散并迷路并迷路侧重心理描写2017.6记叙文Mac 和朋友骑行途中偶遇恶狼和朋友骑行途中偶遇恶狼侧重动作描写2017.7记叙文“我我”与健忘母亲的旅行趣事与健忘母亲的旅行趣事侧重人物性格描写2018.6记叙文“我我”与父亲去西部荒野度假与父亲去西部荒野度假时骑马迷路时骑马迷路侧重环境描写indirect characterization (间接人物塑造间接人物塑造)To r
2、eveal a characters traits by describing his or her appearance, thoughts, words, actions, and other characters comments on him or her.Read for plotRead for plot把握故事情节把握故事情节Read for cluesRead for clues寻找故事线索寻找故事线索Read for Read for developmentdevelopment推测故事发展推测故事发展A storyEvent (what)Time (when)Place(w
3、here)Characters (who)Read for plot (把握故事情节) Plot(how)阅读下面短文根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成个完整的故事 After study for hours. I went outside and up to the roof nearby for a break and watched people swimming in the sea. It was a sunny day-a blue, cloudless sky over a calm sea. But then, as I looked in the distance, I disc
4、overed a series of three or four big waves heading towards the shore. Id seen these mini- tsunamis(小型海啸) many times before. They were heading at speed in the direction of the swimming area. Most people knew to look out for them, but from the screams that started coming from the beach, I could tell s
5、omeone was in trouble. Without thinking, I ran down into the street, holding my bodyboard (冲浪板)on the way and shouted at a stranger to call the coastguard(海岸整卫) My neighbor Tom had heard the screaming as well and was also outside with his bodyboard, so together we rushed to the steps that led down t
6、o the sea Once we got closer, we discovered the waves had pulled a boy and a girl into the open sea. I know that the nearest boat would take at least 30 minutes to reach us. I wasnt used to this sort of emergency-Id never been trained as a lifeguard-but I didnt think twice about trying to save them.
7、 I suppose in a way I wanted to impress everyone; at 19, a deal like that can seem like a good opportunity to show off Tom and I dived into the water and it took us 10 minutes to get to them. When we finally reached them, they were almost lifeless with only their heads coming in and out of the water
8、. We could tell they were still alive from their small breaths but it was clear they wouldnt have been able to stay there much longer. I held the boy and pulled him over my board. Tom then moved the girl onto his board.Read for plot a.We pulled kids onto our boards.b.I shouted at a stranger to call
9、the coastguard.c. The kids were almost lifeless.d. A boy and a girl were pulled into the sea.e. I dived into the sea with Tom to save the kids.f. I noted mini-tsunamis heading towards the shore.g. I went out for a break after hours of study.on a sunny dayat the seasidea boy and a girl; I;Tom; coastg
10、uardsaving two kidsgfdbecaRead for clues . Without thinking, I ran down into the street, holding my bodyboard on the way and shouted at a stranger to call the coastguard.Generally, a bodyboard is 1.5 to 2.7m in length and it weighs about 11 to 25 kg.tool help character traits: thoughtful/considerate
11、.indirect characterization settinginciting incidentRising actionClimaxFalling actionResolutionDenouement A _ _ sky over a _ seablue cloudless calmMin-tsunamis _ towards the shore._ started from beachheadedScreams we _ to the steps, led down to the seaRead for development rushedWe reached the boy and
12、 girl but _ from the landtoo far away 划线词分类划线词分类人物类事物类动作类距离时间 划线词分类划线词分类人物类a boy and a girl; Tom事物类waves; boat; opportunity; bodyboard动作类swimming; save距离in the distance时间longerRead for developmentPara.1 We discussed pushing them back to the shore, but we were too far out.Para 2. That night, word cam
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