刘艳Englishwritingskills.ppt
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1、By Liu Yan from No.6 Middle SchoolHow to improve our students writing?Qustion1:How to make our students have something to say?Qustion2:How to change what they want to say into a good composition?Q1:How to make our students have something to say?Maybe you can often train your Ss to practise using the
2、 following methods:Tip1.Learn to ask themselves questions;Tip2.Brainstorm to speak out as much as they can;Tip3.Give examples to support their opinions;Tip4.Use imaginations if necessary.Tip1:Learn to ask themselves questions.where WhenHowMusicWhatWhyWhoEg1:How to talk about I like music.Eg2:How to
3、talk about My vacation.whenHow longWhyVacationWhatWhereWhoweatherHow Eg3:How to talk about Protecting the environment.Q1:Why should we protect the environment?Q2:How should we Protect the environment?Eg4:How to talk about Problems.Q1:What problems do we have?Q2:How should we deal with the problems?T
4、ip2:Brainstorm:busy tiredexamsargue withlet downangrynot enough sleepfamily rulesstressed outhomeworkProblems.Eg1:What problems do you have these days?How should we solve the problems?How to solve the problems try our bestdo homework more quicklycommunicatemake a better study planlisten carefully in
5、 classask teacherfor helpEg2:What words or phrases can you think of when you see the word“Internet”?download search for latest newsfast convenientwatchgamesE-mailsendinformationInternet 1.青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the e
6、arth.For example,we can use shopping basket instead of plastic bags when we go shopping.And dont forget to turn off the taps and lights in time when we dont need them.Tip3:Give examples to support your ideas.2.在家里,我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。在家里,我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。I often help my parents do housework,such as washing dis
7、hes,folding the clothes,taking out the trash and so on.Tip4:Use imaginations if necessary.1.在家里,我经常帮助父母亲干家务。在家里,我经常帮助父母亲干家务。I often help my parents do housework.They go to work during the day time and they must be tired after a full days work.If I do so,they can have a good rest.2.Compare A with BA:
8、Animals are our friends,so lets protect them!B:Dont you think animals are our lovely friends?So its our duty to protect them instead of hurting or killing them.Dont put it off!Lets try our best to help our friends today!Question2:How to change what they want to say into a good composition?Lets take
9、the topic Internet as an example!download search for latest newsfast convenientwatchgamesE-mailsendinformationInternet Steps towards writing a good paragraphS St tep ep 1 1 Try to say some sentences according to the words or phrases2.With the Internet,we can get the latest news.1.The Internet is fas
10、t and convenient.3.We can find and download information that we need.5.We can play games on it.4.We can send some emails to our friends.Steps towards writing a good paragraphStep 2 How to change it into a well-organized Step 2 How to change it into a well-organized paragraphparagraphThe structure of
11、 a compositionTopic sentenceSupporting detailsReason 1Reason 2 Reason 3ConclusionWrite a topic sentence for the paragraphn nThe Internet is fast and convenient.With the Internet,we can get the latest news.We can find and download information that we need.We can send emails to friends.We can play gam
12、es on it.n The Internet plays an important part in our life./The Internet is very useful in our life.Conclusion:We cant live without the Internet.How to write a good paragraphNowadays the Internet plays an important part in our life.It is fast and convenient.With the Internet,we can get the latest n
13、ews.We can find and download information that we need.We can send emails to friends.We can play games on it.We cant live without the Internet.Connect the sentences with link words to introduce supporting points:First(Firstly),First(Firstly),Second(Secondly),Second(Secondly),Third(Thirdly),Third(Thir
14、dly),First of all,First of all,Also(In addition),Also(In addition),Finally,Finally,However,However,Conclusion wordsIn my opinion,In a word,In short,Generally speaking,Add link words or phrases to make the supporting details better-organized:Nowadays the Internet plays an important part in our life.W
15、ith the Internet,we can get the latest news.It is fast and convenient.We can find and download information that we need.We can send emails to friends.We can play games on it.We cant live without the Internet.Nowadays the Internet plays an important part in our life.It is not only fast but convenient
16、 as well.We can do many things with the Internet.First of all,we can get the latest news.Secondly,We can find and download information that we need.Whats more,we can send emails to friends.We can even play games on it.In a word,we cant live without the Internet.(70words)n nBodyBody n nConclusion/Opi
17、nion Topic sentence Supporting details Right Link wordsand sentence patternsA good compositionof “giving opinion”n ntitleSummary Strategies to improve their writingTips:1.Learn to write a topic sentence.2.Use link words to make the paragraph well-organized.3.Try to beautify the writing.4.Add a good
18、beginning and an ending.1.is usually the_sentence of a paragraph.Topic sentencefirst of a paragraph.2.Topic sentence tells_the main idea概括段落主要意思概括段落主要意思strategy1 Learn to write a topic sentence.Bridge Street is a good place to have fun.It is a very busy street.You can play guitar in the park.And if
19、youre hungry,you can buy some food in the supermarket.Find out the topic sentenceMy eating habits are pretty good.I try to eat a lot of vegetables.I eat fruit and drink milk every day.I never drink coffee.Of course,I love junk food too,and I eat it two or three times a week._ She gets up early in th
20、e morning and then reads English for half an hour.In class,Alice listens to the teachers carefully and takes notes at times.After finishing her homework,she teaches herself new lessons every night.On weekends,Alice usually goes to the city library to read books.A.Alice is a student.B.Alice is a frie
21、ndly student.C.Alice is a hard-working student.Choose the right topic sentenceWrite a topic sentence for the report.A big problemn n90%of the citys rivers are polluted.n nThe air in the city is getting dirtier.n nNoise is becoming a big headache for people.Pollution is becoming a serious problem in
22、the city.My family members have different hobbies.My father loves collecting stamps.My mother is interested in cooking.My sister likes watching TV,and my grandparents enjoy traveling.Write the topic sentence_ I am tired,I keep on working till midnight.He didnt go to movies,he went to the concert _.W
23、e like doing kinds of sports _ swimming,running and hiking._,he stood up.Then he got out._,he went back._,he smiled.ThoughAlthoughinsteadlikeFirstNextFinallyAt lastStrategy2 Use link words to make the sentences well-organized.Fill in the blanks with link words2.School uniform rule has its advantages
24、._,we dont have to spend time thinking about what to wear every day._ ,we dont need to worry about competing with others based on how we look._,it has some disadvantages.Our personality cant be shown if we wear the same clothes every day_,sometimes the uniform style is old-fashioned.First of allFirs
25、t of allAlso/In additionAlso/In additionHoweverHoweverWhatWhat s mores moreStrategy3Try to beautify the writing.Skill One:Make your sentences correctGood good study,day day up.We should do sports a week once.Save the environment is our duty.There is going to have a meeting today.I hope I can come tr
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