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1、教师姓名学科英语上课时间讲义序号(同一学生)学生姓名年级组长签字日期课题名称作文练习教学目标掌握看图作文的步骤和方法教学重点 难点做到文章完整,句式灵活课前检查作业完成情况:优 良 中 差 建议_教学过程 教学过程了解作文打分档四档文:内容不完整,语言表述错误很多,不能完整地 表达思想。可得0-2分三档文:内容完整,重点描述合理,但表述不充分,层次结构不合理,语言不够流畅,字迹不够工整,5-6处语法或拼写错误;字数不足。可得3-5分二档文:内容完整,重点描述比较充分,层次结构比较清晰,语言比较流畅,字迹工整,有3-4处语法或拼写错误;字数符合要求。 可得6-8分一档文:内容完整,重点描述清楚、
2、合理,表达充分,层次结构清晰,字迹工整,可读性强,语言流畅,仅有1-2处语法或拼写错误;字数符合要求。 可得9-10分看图作文难度稍大,在写作时它要根据图画呈现的内容与所给的中英文提示相结合来表达其内在涵义,描述图画内容,使短文达意、正确、连贯。 看图作文可采用以下几个步骤:1、理解图意,确立情景 2、注意所给的中英文提示3、明确时态,理顺思路 4、连词成句,然后再连句成文5、反复审核,修改错误假设下面五幅图画描述的是你在5月3日(星期五)的一段亲身经历。请你根据画面内容,写一篇80字左右的日记。英文日记的格式英文日记通常由书端和正文两个部分组成。中、英文的日记格式大致一样。英语日记的书端是写
3、日记的日期、星期和天气的。左上角是日期(年、月、日)、星期。右上角写上当天的天气情况,如:Sunny,Fine,Rainy,Windy,Snowy等。 日记的正文是日记的主要部分,写在星期和日期的正下方,可以顶格写,也可以内缩3至5个字母的空间。 文章内容完整。1.今天下午我去看电影go to a moviego to the cinema see a filmthis afternoonIts a fine day today.I went to a movie happily this afternoon.2.在路上,我看到一个手提箱从一辆自行车上掉了下来on the wayfall do
4、wn from / fall offsee / find + 复合宾语On the way, I found/saw a case fall down from/off a mans bike3.我捡起箱子,并向骑车人大声喊叫,但他却没听见,走远了pick up shout toride awayI picked up the case and shouted to the man, but he didnt hear me and rode away.4.于是,我拦了一辆出租车去追赶失主.stop a taxicatch up withI stopped a taxi to catch up
5、 with the man.5.我终于追上了失主,并把箱子还给他.I caught up with him at last and gave the case back to him失主非常的感动,他拿出一些钱来感谢我,但被我拒绝了.give back / returnrefuse The man took out some money to thank me, but I refusedMay 3rd,Friday Fine This afternoon, I went to see a film. On the way, I saw a case fall off a mans bike.
6、 I picked up the case and shouted to the man to stop. But he didnt hear me and rode away. I stopped a taxi and got into it with the case. And we caught up with the man. I gave the case back to him. The man thanked me very much and wanted to give me some money. But I refused .句子种类灵活多样避免单一把两个或多个句子合并为简
7、单句1、把其中一句改为介词短语I picked up the case.I shouted at the man loudlyAfter picking up the case, I shouted to the man loudly2、把其中一句改为分词短语I gave the case back to the man.The man took out some money to thank meGetting the case back from me, the man took out some money to thank me把两个或多个句子合并成复合句I went to see a
8、 film this afternoon.One the way to the cinema, I saw a case fall off a mans bike.I was on my way to the cinema this afternoon when I happened to see a case fall off a mans bike.适当选择固定句型But he didnt hear me and rode awayBut he rode too fast to hear me.I wanted to catch up with him ,so I stopped a ta
9、xi quicklyI stopped a taxi as quickly as I could in order to catch up with the man文章结构首位照应,构思精巧May 3rd,Friday Fine This afternoon, I went to see a film. On the way, I saw The man thanked me very much and wanted to give me some money. But I refused .It was such an interesting movie that I couldnt wai
10、t to enjoy itAlthough I missed the movie, I was very happy to help others.最近媒体对“中国式过马路”这一现象进行了尖锐的批评,请你以一个中学生的角色,写一篇短文,对“中国式过马路”这一现象加以评述。注意:1. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和学校名称。 2. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。字数:80词左右,不可逐字翻译。 3. 参考词语:红绿灯traffic lights, 缺乏交通安全意识lack traffic safety awareness 遵守交通规则obey the traffic rulesChinese Styles
11、 of Crossing StreetsChinese styles of crossing streets has been a hot topic on the Internet recently._Chinese style of crossing streets has been a hot topic on the Internet recently.Nowadays, many people cross streets without looking at the traffic lights. Why? I think there are two main reasons. So
12、me people lack traffic safety awareness. Besides, some people are so hurry that they dont want to wait for the green lights.However, it has brought danger tothemselves as well as to others. So I hope something must be done to avoid traffic accidents. For example, whoever breaks the traffic rules sho
13、uld be punished.As middle school students, we should obey the traffic rules. Whats more, I will try my best to advise people to obey the rules. Only in this way can we cross streets safely.和谐,玉润心田;文明,风暖校园。情节和下面所提供的漫画和提示词,以 “Doing our part” (从我做起) 为题写一篇短文,内容必须包括: 1. 简单描述图中人物行为,并简述你的看法; 2. 发表你的校园文明倡议。
14、提示词:talk loudly; drop litter; save food; get along well with要求:1. 条理清楚,又表明自己观点的句子;可适当发挥。 2. 文中不能出现校名、人名、地名等真实信息。 3. 80100词。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。 Doing Our PartFrom the picture, we can see that the boy _ Doing Our PartFrom the picture, we can see the boy is dropping litter outside the trash bin. The ground
15、 looks dirty. I think what he does is wrong.As middle school students, it is our duty to behave well and try to make the school more beautiful. We shouldnt talk loudly in public. Dropping litter is not allowed in or out of school. Never waste food while eating in the dining room. Also we are suppose
16、d to get on well with the classmates. Being polite to teachers is also very important.In a word, if every can do out part, we can make a difference to the world.根据所给图画,用英语写一篇约80词的短文。要求完整叙述图画内容。参考词汇:blind adj. 盲的,瞎的 stick n. 拐杖_ Last weekend Xiaoming went to the park with his mother and sister. It wa
17、s sunny and there were some people and traffics in it. They played very happily. When they wanted to have taken photos, Xiaoming saw an old blind man far from them, he was walking with a sick alone. He thought it was very dangers for the old man. So Xiaoming ran quickly to the man and help the man w
18、alk on by catching the stick. When the blind mans daughter found him, she thanked Xiaoming and praised him. At this moment, the photographer took the precious photo课后学生作业布置(手写)4教师姓名学科得分学生姓名日期家长签名作业内容作文练习假如这副漫画表现的是你所经历的事情,请根据所给提示描述事情经过并谈谈你的看法。提示词:jaywalk vi. 乱穿马路;run the red light 闯红灯注意: 文中不能出现真实姓名和学
19、校名。词数80 100。_ _ 周末是我们放松身心,和朋友、家人参加户外活动的日子。你的周末呢?还记得你拥有的最难忘的周末么?你觉得周末如何度过才能更有意义?请以“My Weekend”为题,写一篇80词左右的英语短文。内容包括:Are you busy on weekends?Please tell us an unforgettable weekend you had.How do you think teenagers should spend their weekends? 亲爱的同学们,父母在我们的成长过程中,始终是我们最亲密和最重要的人。你和父母之间相处的融洽么?还是偶尔也会有一些小的摩擦?你还记得你与父母之间发生过的一件不同寻常的事么?你觉得应该与父母如何相处呢?现在请你写一篇80词左右的英语短文,内容包括:Do you get along well with your parents?Please tell us an unusual thing that happened between your parents and you.How do you think we should get along with our parents? 总结
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