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1、会计学1高考英语写作指导课高考英语写作指导课 副本副本高考英语评分原则:高考英语评分原则:1.本题总分为本题总分为25分,按分,按5个档次个档次给分。给分。2.评分时,先根据文章的评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言内容和语言初步确初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。确定或调整档次,最后给分。3.词数词数少于少于80和和多于多于120的,从总分中的,从总分中减去减去2分。分。4.评分时应注意的主要内容为:评分时应注意的主要内容为:内容要点内容要点,应用词汇应用词汇和和语法结构语法结构的的丰富性丰富性和和准确性准确性及上下文的
2、及上下文的连贯性连贯性。第2页/共87页高考英语评分原则:高考英语评分原则:5.拼写与标点符号拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时,应视其对交际影响的程度予以考虑。评分时,应视其对交际影响的程度予以考虑。英,美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。英,美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6.如如书写较差书写较差以至影响交际,将其以至影响交际,将其分数降分数降低一个档次低一个档次。7.语言首先要求准确通顺。语言首先要求准确通顺。8.鼓励写出新颖词汇,顺畅连接和复杂结构。鼓励写出新颖词汇,顺畅连接和复杂结构。第3页/共87页总结总结:什么样的作文是一篇好作文:什么样的作文是一篇好作文n n
3、无遗漏信息点,即要点全面无遗漏信息点,即要点全面无遗漏信息点,即要点全面无遗漏信息点,即要点全面n n篇章条理清晰:分段和过渡词篇章条理清晰:分段和过渡词篇章条理清晰:分段和过渡词篇章条理清晰:分段和过渡词n n句式复杂多样句式复杂多样句式复杂多样句式复杂多样n n地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组接下来,我们具体感知一下优秀作文的要素。接下来,我们具体感知一下优秀作文的要素。第4页/共87页A good compositioncontent structure languagebe attractive,beautiful
4、,completed in a limited time!What is a good writing?第5页/共87页Structure:*Good beginning and ending(好的好的开头结尾开头结尾)*Well organized and smoothly developed (结构合理结构合理,行文流畅行文流畅)Language:*No Chinglish(避免中文式英文避免中文式英文)*No Grammatical mistakes(没有没有语法错误语法错误)*With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence
5、 patterns (词语的准确运用和句式的富于变词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化化)第6页/共87页明确写作步骤 1.Cross-question(审题审题)Main idea Style Verb tense Person2.Seize the major points/key words(抓要点抓要点)figure out the outline(提纲提纲)4.Ensure the fluency(添加过渡,确保添加过渡,确保连贯)连贯)Conjunctions/conjunctive adverbspassage5.Error correcting (查错改错查错改错)3.Sentenc
6、es connection (连句成文连句成文)Words/phrases Sentencespassage第7页/共87页高考作文高分卷的特点高考作文高分卷的特点n n外在美外在美:第一印象很重要!书写清:第一印象很重要!书写清楚,字母匀称,词、行间距适当,楚,字母匀称,词、行间距适当,卷面整洁。卷面整洁。n n结构美结构美:有合理的段落层次,多为:有合理的段落层次,多为3段式,条理清晰;每段有每段的段式,条理清晰;每段有每段的主题。主题。第8页/共87页n n词汇美词汇美词汇美词汇美:词汇反映你知识贮存量的多词汇反映你知识贮存量的多词汇反映你知识贮存量的多词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少,也是衡
7、量英语水平的一个重要标少,也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标少,也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标少,也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。志。志。志。likelikebe fond of,be addicted to/be fond of,be addicted to/helphelpdo sb a favordo sb a favor n n句式美句式美句式美句式美:运用得当的运用得当的运用得当的运用得当的高级句式结构高级句式结构高级句式结构高级句式结构可可可可以给文章增色不少,从而使整篇文章以给文章增色不少,从而使整篇文章以给文章增色不少,从而使整篇文章以给文章增色不少,从而使整篇文章因此而生辉因此而生辉
8、因此而生辉因此而生辉 。n n衔接美衔接美衔接美衔接美:使用恰当的使用恰当的使用恰当的使用恰当的连接词连接词连接词连接词,对写一,对写一,对写一,对写一篇有篇有篇有篇有“英语味英语味英语味英语味”的文章很重要,能使的文章很重要,能使的文章很重要,能使的文章很重要,能使文章上下衔接自然、条理清晰。文章上下衔接自然、条理清晰。文章上下衔接自然、条理清晰。文章上下衔接自然、条理清晰。第9页/共87页卷面篇卷面篇第10页/共87页养眼的养眼的第11页/共87页第12页/共87页第13页/共87页第14页/共87页第15页/共87页当批到下午两点看当批到下午两点看到了它们到了它们第16页/共87页太挤了
9、太挤了第17页/共87页太乱了太乱了第18页/共87页太空了太空了第19页/共87页太潦草了太潦草了第20页/共87页太没谱了太没谱了第21页/共87页老师最恨的作文老师最恨的作文第22页/共87页大锅,标点呢?段呢大锅,标点呢?段呢?第23页/共87页神,你别抄阅读理解行不神,你别抄阅读理解行不?俺们也会看试卷的!?俺们也会看试卷的!第24页/共87页老师最喜欢的作文老师最喜欢的作文第25页/共87页Great minds think alike!第26页/共87页作文五档:(作文五档:(从教师阅卷印象角度划分)从教师阅卷印象角度划分)n n漂漂亮亮(2125分)n n有模有样(1620分)
10、n n马马虎虎(1115分)n n稀里糊涂(610分)n n一塌糊涂 (05分)第27页/共87页Three Rules:n n1.You learn to write by writing.n n2.There is no good writing;only good rewriting.n n3.When in dout,refer to Rule No.1 and 2.第28页/共87页二、感知典型范例词汇层面词汇层面1n nadj.聪明的、脑筋聪明的、脑筋好的好的n nclevern n wise wisen n smart smartn n brightbrightn n intel
11、ligentintelligent第29页/共87页n n他昨天下午来的。他昨天下午来的。1.1.He came here yesterday afternoon.He came here yesterday afternoon.2.2.He He didnt didnt come here come here until until yesterday afternoon.yesterday afternoon.3.3.Not untilNot until yesterday afternoon yesterday afternoon diddid he come here.he come
12、here.4.4.It wasIt was yesterday afternoon yesterday afternoon thatthat he came here.he came here.二、感知典型范例句型层面句型层面1第30页/共87页n n令她吃惊的是,小女孩知道这令她吃惊的是,小女孩知道这么多事情。么多事情。1.He is surprised that the little girl knows so many things.2.To his surprise,the little girl knows so many things.3.What surprises him is
13、 that the little girl knows so many things.二、感知典型范例句型层面句型层面2第31页/共87页二、感知典型范例段落层面段落层面1This village is very small.It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.It used to be very poor.It has changed a lot since 1978.People here are richer than before.Now it is taking on a new look.This village is v
14、ery small,which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.It used to be very poor.However,it has changed a lot since 1978.People here are leading a richer and happier life than before.Now it is taking on a new look.第32页/共87页二、感知典型范例篇章层面篇章层面1第33页/共87页第34页/共87页第35页/共87页第36页/共87页DISCUSSION:What is a
15、 good writing?How to catch the experts eyes?第37页/共87页DISCUSSION:What is a good writing?Content:Everything which is related to your view needs to includ.(内容要完整内容要完整)(内容要点一个也不能丢,如果人(内容要点一个也不能丢,如果人家给的是文字提示,可以用笔在家给的是文字提示,可以用笔在试题处标出试题处标出1,2,3,4,如果人家给的,如果人家给的是图,那要先看懂图的意思,六是图,那要先看懂图的意思,六个图都要看看再动笔,不要看了个图都要看
16、看再动笔,不要看了一个马上就写。)一个马上就写。)第38页/共87页1)Traffic in Shanghai is too crowded.1)Traffic in Shanghai is too crowded.2)There has a highway connected with 2)There has a highway connected with Beijing.Beijing.3)Though shes almost 403)Though shes almost 40,but she still but she still plans to compete.plans to c
17、ompete.4)I forgot my dictionary at home.4)I forgot my dictionary at home.5)It will cost us much money to buy one.5)It will cost us much money to buy one.heavy.leftistakeAvoid Chinglish!第39页/共87页改错改错1.I cant understand them when I meet new words,so I have to refer to them in the dictionary.2.The abil
18、ity to read English passages is slowly.3.There is no doubt that English Study needs lotsof time and efforts.4.Only by this way,can we keep up with otherstudents.5.Im LiHua,a new student of you.meet withlook uplowlearninginLi Huayours第40页/共87页6.My English level is common and I cant speak verywell.7.I
19、 believe we can get alone well with each other.8.Besides,I think speaking English is as important aswriting English.9.I study English for 12 years so I think I know English very well.10.There are some advice in teaching English.averageitalongspokenwrittenhave studiedis第41页/共87页Adopt a variety of sen
20、tence patterns 使用较丰富的句式使用较丰富的句式1.They even threw rubbish into the lake.They totally ignored the noticeable sign No littering nearby.(使用使用V-ing形式形式)They even threw rubbish into the lake,_ the noticeable sign No littering nearby.totally ignoring第42页/共87页Adopt a variety of sentence patterns 使用较丰富的句式使用较
21、丰富的句式Not long ago I won the first prize in the English contest_in our school.(12 山东山东)held2.Not long ago I won the first prize in the English contest.It was held in our school.(使用过去分词使用过去分词)第43页/共87页3.To his surprise,the little girl knows so many things.(使用名词性从句使用名词性从句)4.People suggest that the conf
22、erence be put off.(改被动语态改被动语态)_ the little girl knows so many things.What surprises him is that_the conference be put off.It is suggested that第44页/共87页5.He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型使用强调句型)6.I passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虚拟语气
23、)用虚拟语气)_he had read the news in the newspaper _ he knew what had happened._the physics exam _your help.It was not until I couldnt have passed thatbut for/without第45页/共87页7.I wont believe what he says.(使用状语使用状语 从句从句)8.The girl is spoken highly of.Her composition was well written.(用定语从句用定语从句)_he says,
24、I wont believe.The girl_is spoken highly of.No matter what/Whateverwhose composition was well written第46页/共87页9.If you study hard,you will make rapid progress.(用并列句)(用并列句)10.He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.(使用倒使用倒装句装句)_he come back from Beijing _he was sent abroad._ma
25、ke rapid progress.Study hard,and youllNo sooner had Hardly/scarcely.when.than第47页/共87页四、明确写作步骤抄抄改改连连扩扩抓抓审审书面书面表达表达第48页/共87页Please learn to Your compositionwhen you finish it from now.第49页/共87页n n 书面表达评价表书面表达评价表书面表达评价表书面表达评价表n n 项目项目项目项目 自评自评自评自评 他评他评他评他评n n1.1.书写工整吗?有没有乱涂乱划书写工整吗?有没有乱涂乱划书写工整吗?有没有乱涂乱划
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