大学英语六级写作辅导1 (2).ppt
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1、大学英语六级写作辅导1Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledDueAttitudeShouldBeGiventotheStudyofChinese.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.1.近年来在学生中出现了忽视中文的现象。2.出现这种现象的原因和后果。3.为了改变这种状况,我认为3SchoolofForeignLanguages,ZhejiangGongshangUniversity大英六级作文辅导大英六级作
2、文辅导1评分重点项目评分重点项目关联词同义替换(词汇+句型)代词替换内容:不跑题4SchoolofForeignLanguages,ZhejiangGongshangUniversity大英六级作文辅导大英六级作文辅导1六级写作改卷分析六级写作改卷分析CET作文题采用总体评分(GlobalScoring)方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分(RewardScores),而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。5SchoolofForeignLanguages,ZhejiangGongshangUniversity大英六级作文辅导大英六级作文辅导1大纲解读:两大黄金原则大纲解读:两大黄金原则一、卷面整洁、书
3、写工整、语言第一位、结构第二位、内容第三位:二、语言二、语言基本正确,无重大语法错误句式丰富多变(词汇+句型)6SchoolofForeignLanguages,ZhejiangGongshangUniversity大英六级作文辅导大英六级作文辅导1段落分布段数:3-4段落结构:总分总主题句:翻译提纲,作出评论1-2句论证:2句小结:1句7SchoolofForeignLanguages,ZhejiangGongshangUniversity大英六级作文辅导大英六级作文辅导130分钟的合理安排分钟的合理安排5(审题和构思)(审题和构思)+20(正文)(正文)+5(检查)(检查)*不建议打草稿,
4、时间和空间不足*可以写出一些关键词和大纲来*最后五分钟要自查硬伤-检查语法错误,连接错误,标点符号等。*不要改内容了!8SchoolofForeignLanguages,ZhejiangGongshangUniversity大英六级作文辅导大英六级作文辅导1Vary(变化、多样变化、多样)原则原则熟读唐诗三百首,不会作诗也会吟;熟读唐诗三百首,不会作诗也会吟;写作是一门主观性很强的考试,写作是一门主观性很强的考试,一篇文一篇文章虽然规定了作文的题目和提纲,但是章虽然规定了作文的题目和提纲,但是具体内容却是可以酌情处理变化的。具体内容却是可以酌情处理变化的。9SchoolofForeignLan
5、guages,ZhejiangGongshangUniversity大英六级作文辅导大英六级作文辅导1低分作文的特征低分作文的特征语法错误多Chinglish没有句式结构10SchoolofForeignLanguages,ZhejiangGongshangUniversity大英六级作文辅导大英六级作文辅导1写作常见错误分析写作常见错误分析五种尤其容易犯的错误五种尤其容易犯的错误1-时态错误时态错误Manypeoplethoughtj1thattheInternetwillbemoreusefulinthefuture.j1thoughtthink11SchoolofForeignLangu
6、ages,ZhejiangGongshangUniversity大英六级作文辅导大英六级作文辅导1单复数错误Wisemanj1seekj2opportunitiesratherthanwaitforthem.j1wiseman前面应加上a/the单数可数名词不可单独存在,要么加限定词,要么变复数j2seek应改为seeks12SchoolofForeignLanguages,ZhejiangGongshangUniversity大英六级作文辅导大英六级作文辅导1代词错误Wecanusecomputersindoingeverythingyouj1likej1youweIfwecheatothe
7、rs,friendswillneverbelieveyouandtheywillleaveyouj1alone.j1两个you都改成us13SchoolofForeignLanguages,ZhejiangGongshangUniversity大英六级作文辅导大英六级作文辅导1冠词错误Horseisanusefulanimal.Horse前面应加上a/theAn应改为a14SchoolofForeignLanguages,ZhejiangGongshangUniversity大英六级作文辅导大英六级作文辅导1词性错误从1999年到2002年该国出生率呈现逐渐下降趋势。From1999to200
8、2,thecountrypossesseda_(gradual)_(increase)trendinbirthrate.-graduallyincreasing15SchoolofForeignLanguages,ZhejiangGongshangUniversity大英六级作文辅导大英六级作文辅导1词性错误大家都应该认识到肥胖的危害。Everyoneshouldbeconsciousofthedangersof_(fat).-fatness/obesity16SchoolofForeignLanguages,ZhejiangGongshangUniversity大英六级作文辅导大英六级作文辅
9、导1写完整的英文句典型错误一:Jinjinholdingthetorchasifthatisherlife.Ilookforwardtoholidays.Forexample,ThanksgivingandChristmas.17SchoolofForeignLanguages,ZhejiangGongshangUniversity大英六级作文辅导大英六级作文辅导12.要有一定程度的省略典型错误一:TibetwasapartofChina,TibetisapartofChina,andTibetwillalwaysbeapartofChina.18SchoolofForeignLanguage
10、s,ZhejiangGongshangUniversity大英六级作文辅导大英六级作文辅导1省略要正确典型错误二:ChinaYaoalwayshasandwillalwaysdohisbesttowinthegames.-ChinaYaohasalwaysdoneandwillcontinuetodohisbesttowinthegames.19SchoolofForeignLanguages,ZhejiangGongshangUniversity大英六级作文辅导大英六级作文辅导13.句号一定要用对JayChousnewlyreleasedmovieKungfuDunkhashitthecin
11、ema,Iamgoingtoseeittomorrow.-JayChousnewlyreleasedmovieKungfuDunkhashitthecinemaandIamgoingtoseeittomorrow.20SchoolofForeignLanguages,ZhejiangGongshangUniversity大英六级作文辅导大英六级作文辅导1中层次作文水平中层次作文水平语法错误时有出现内容不够结构性词汇不够明显21SchoolofForeignLanguages,ZhejiangGongshangUniversity大英六级作文辅导大英六级作文辅导1如何拓展思路?如何拓展思路?事物
12、发生背后的本质到底是什么?事物发生背后的本质到底是什么?人是有需求的动物,需求取决于得人是有需求的动物,需求取决于得到了什么,还缺少什么。到了什么,还缺少什么。22SchoolofForeignLanguages,ZhejiangGongshangUniversity大英六级作文辅导大英六级作文辅导1马斯洛需求层次理论马斯洛需求层次理论(1943年在年在人类激励理论人类激励理论)1.生理需求生理需求2.安全需求安全需求3.感情需求感情需求4.尊重需求尊重需求5.自我实现的需求自我实现的需求只要是人,每做一件事情都可以从里面只要是人,每做一件事情都可以从里面找到千丝万缕的根源。找到千丝万缕的根源
13、。23SchoolofForeignLanguages,ZhejiangGongshangUniversity大英六级作文辅导大英六级作文辅导1万能理由万能理由1、方便:convenient/convenience2、效率:efficient/efficiently/efficiency3、经济(节省和浪费):savetime/money/space;economical,thriftwastetime/money/space;costly,lavish4:心理(情感、乐趣、喜爱,憎恶)&成就感(荣誉自信、动力、压力)5.健康healthy,disease,strong,strength,en
14、ergetic24SchoolofForeignLanguages,ZhejiangGongshangUniversity大英六级作文辅导大英六级作文辅导1万能理由万能理由5、娱乐:colorful,pleasure,joy,recreation,relaxentertainment,tired,boring,lonely6、环境:environment,pollute,poisonous,dirty7、安全和危险:safe,danger,risk8:经验:experience,socialexperience,enterthesociety9、人际:humane,fair,unfair,he
15、lp,assist,freedom,freely10.国家(民族、社会、公益、)-25SchoolofForeignLanguages,ZhejiangGongshangUniversity大英六级作文辅导大英六级作文辅导1练习一、住在大城市的好处和坏处ThereasonwhyIprefertoliveinthebigcitiesisthattherearemorejobopportunities,educationopportunitiesandbetterlivingconditionsinthebigcitiesthaninthesmalltowns.26SchoolofForeignL
16、anguages,ZhejiangGongshangUniversity大英六级作文辅导大英六级作文辅导1disadvantagesButthecostfortheprivilegeoflivinginthecityisalsohigh.Whatsmore,thereismoregasandnoisepollutioninthecity,27SchoolofForeignLanguages,ZhejiangGongshangUniversity大英六级作文辅导大英六级作文辅导1(Example3)有人认为大学生做兼职工作很有好处;ThereasonwhyIprefertoliveinthebi
17、gcitiesisthattherearemorejobopportunities,educationopportunitiesandbetterlivingconditionsinthebigcitiesthaninthesmalltowns.28SchoolofForeignLanguages,ZhejiangGongshangUniversity大英六级作文辅导大英六级作文辅导1有人认为大学生做兼职工作有人认为大学生做兼职工作弊多利少弊多利少However,someotherpeopleholdthatdoingpart-timejobshasmoredisadvantages.Them
18、ainjobofcollegestudentsistostudy,nottowork.Iftheyhavepart-timejobs,theymayhavetoreducetheirtimeforsleep,rest,studyandactivities.Workingseveralhoursadayconsumesalotoftimeandenergyandmayaffecttheirstudies.Asaresult,theymayfindithardtoadjusttowhatthecollegeexpectsofthemaswellastheiremployersexpect,andf
19、inally,theymayfallbehindorfailintheirstudies.1h29SchoolofForeignLanguages,ZhejiangGongshangUniversity大英六级作文辅导大英六级作文辅导1高分作文高分作文词汇准确多样句式复杂有力30SchoolofForeignLanguages,ZhejiangGongshangUniversity大英六级作文辅导大英六级作文辅导12个注意点个注意点写作中两类避免使用的单词口语词:Youknow,wellheyman,whatup?gonnawanna生僻词31SchoolofForeignLanguages,
20、ZhejiangGongshangUniversity大英六级作文辅导大英六级作文辅导114分作文的词汇亮点词汇亮点Althoughhonestyisbelievedtobeavirtue,therearestilldishonestpeopleinoursociety.Forexample,somebusinessmensellfakeproducttotheirconsumers;somestudentscheatintheexams.评论:这个句子当中有一些闪光词:1)fakeproduct假冒产品。badproduct;2)consumer。buyer。3)virtue用的也很好。32
21、SchoolofForeignLanguages,ZhejiangGongshangUniversity大英六级作文辅导大英六级作文辅导18分的作文Inourmodernsociallife,therearemanyexamplesaroundusshowj1manypeoplearecheated.Advertisementscheat people,salesmencheat people,evenonesclosestfriendscheat himorher.1.peopleconsumer或customer。这些词就马上有了闪光点2.第二个cheatfool。第三个cheatliet
22、o3.j1Showingthat33SchoolofForeignLanguages,ZhejiangGongshangUniversity大英六级作文辅导大英六级作文辅导1用词准确多样用词准确多样一、准确性一、准确性在图表类作文中要经常表达在图表类作文中要经常表达“有很大的有很大的增长增长”,很多人会写成很多人会写成-abigincrease.请注意请注意bigasharpincrease.注意收集以下三种搭配。注意收集以下三种搭配。adj+n:asharpincreasev+n:makeamistake,commitacrime,v+adv:expandsharply/dramatical
23、ly34SchoolofForeignLanguages,ZhejiangGongshangUniversity大英六级作文辅导大英六级作文辅导1多样性多样性-用同义词替代用同义词替代例例1:A对对B很重要很重要.AisimportanttoB.Aplaysanimportantrole/partinB.AisofimportancetoB.Bcannotlive/develop/grow/survivewithoutA.AistoBwhatthefoundationistoaskyscraper/wateristofish.Aisessential/significant/crucial/c
24、ritical/vitaltoB.TheimportanceofAtoBcanneverbedenied/ignored/exaggerated.35SchoolofForeignLanguages,ZhejiangGongshangUniversity大英六级作文辅导大英六级作文辅导1例例2,不同国家不同背景的人在不同场合有着不同,不同国家不同背景的人在不同场合有着不同的观点。的观点。Differentpeoplewithdifferentpersonalbackgroundsindifferentcountrieshavedifferentopinionsondifferentoccasi
25、ons.Different在不同场合的同义词有unlike、dissimilar(不同的,不一样的),distinct、separate(个别的,单独的),various、assorted(各种各样的,多样的),36SchoolofForeignLanguages,ZhejiangGongshangUniversity大英六级作文辅导大英六级作文辅导1这句话可以改为:Differentpeoplewithunlikepersonalbackgroundsinvariouscountrieshavevaryingopinionsonchangedoccasions.这个句子用了这么多“不同的”,
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