英语:高考作文指导课件.ppt
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1、高考复习高考复习 -书面表达评析及指导书面表达评析及指导 伴随着高中新课程改革,选课制,学分制进入了高中课程,许多学校纷纷开设了各种各样的选修课,以满足高中学生的多样化需求.据报道,某中学把股票的基本知识与多元化投资引入了高中课程。你班同学就此展开了激烈的争论。以下是两种主要观点。请结合以上材料写一篇120字左右的英语短文,介绍这两种观点,并对高中生该不该炒股发表个人看法 参考词汇 股票:stocks 分散:distract新课程:new curriculums 选修课 optional course 正方反方1 了解股票相关知识2 树立正确的投资理财观念3 为将来走向社会作准备1 学生自制力
2、差,可能沉湎于股市 2 如果分散注意力,就不能学好功课3 万一投资失误,可能造成经济损失。1.第五档第五档(很好很好):(21-25分分)-覆盖所有的内容要点覆盖所有的内容要点;-应用了较多的语法结构和词汇应用了较多的语法结构和词汇;-语法结构或词汇方面有语法结构或词汇方面有少许错误少许错误,但为尽力使用但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用具备较强的语言运用能力能力;-有效地使用了语句的连结成分有效地使用了语句的连结成分,使使全文结构紧凑全文结构紧凑;完全达到了预期的写作目的完全达到了预期的写作目的.各档评分标准各档评分标准 With the r
3、eform of new curriculums in senior school,optional courses are offered to satisfy students needs.Its reported that a middle school brought in The Basic knowledge on Stocks as a new course.This raise a storm of argument.Some students go firmly for it.They point out that its necessary for students to
4、understand some knowledge about stocks,so they will establish right concept of investing and its helpful to students to adapt to the society in the future.But the negative aspects are also apparent.To begin with,some students cant control themselves well.That is to say,if they are crazy about the st
5、ocks,they may be lost in it.So,its probable that they will make some mistakes in investing for lack of experience,which will cause great economic loss to his family.From the comparison between advantages and disadvantages,I think it is necessary for us to learn some knowledge of stocks.But as a stud
6、ent,we should regard our study as the first task.Only in this way we will have a bright future.will we 内容完整内容完整;句式丰富句式丰富;用词优美简洁用词优美简洁,语言功底扎实语言功底扎实;虽存在一个虽存在一个语法错误语法错误,但本文仍旧是一篇上乘之作但本文仍旧是一篇上乘之作.2.第四档案第四档案(好好):(16-20分分)完全完成了试题规定的任务完全完成了试题规定的任务.-虽漏掉虽漏掉1,2个次重点个次重点,但但覆盖所有主要内容覆盖所有主要内容;-应用的语法结构或词汇能满足任务的要求应用的
7、语法结构或词汇能满足任务的要求;-语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,少许错误少许错误主主 要是因为尝试较复杂的语法结构或词汇所致要是因为尝试较复杂的语法结构或词汇所致;-应用简单的语句间的连接成分应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使使全文结构紧凑全文结构紧凑 达到了预期的写作目的达到了预期的写作目的.Following the reform of the new curriculums,many schools offer many kinds of optional courses to satisfy the various needs of students.The
8、 knowledge about stocks is also offered in certain school.This raise a storm of debate among students in our class.Some students are in favor of it.Firstly,studying it gives students a chance to know some knowledge about stocks.Secondly,it helps to build up the right attitude towards investment.Thir
9、dly,students can prepare for facing the society by studying it.Just as a coin has two sides,some students are against it.Firstly,students cant control themselves well,so they may be addicted in stocks.If students distract attention,they are not be able to study well.Whats more,if they make a wrong d
10、ecide ,their economy may suffer.In my opinion,students studying stocks is a good thing.But only by controlling ourself better can we enjoy the advantages given by the course.to 优点:优点:结构完整结构完整,衔接自然衔接自然;缺点缺点:有些许语法错误有些许语法错误decision ourselves 3.第三档案第三档案(适当适当):(11-15分分)基本完成了试题规定的任务基本完成了试题规定的任务.-虽漏掉一些内容虽漏
11、掉一些内容,但但覆盖所有主要内容覆盖所有主要内容;-应用的语法结构或词汇能满足任务的要求应用的语法结构或词汇能满足任务的要求;-有一些有一些语法结构或词汇方面的语法结构或词汇方面的错误但不影响理解错误但不影响理解;-应用简单的语句间的连接成分应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使使全文结构连贯全文结构连贯;整体而言整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的基本达到了预期的写作目的.With the development of education,so many schools set various optional courses to meet the requires of students,such
12、 as the knowledge of stocks.It cause a widespread concern.Some people agree to it.First,they think students can know knowledge of stocks.Second,its a good way to set up a concept about charge possessions.Last,it can prepare for getting into the society.Some people against it.First,students cant cont
13、rol themselves very good,so it can students are crazy about stocks.Besides,students dont pay attention to their study,it will affect their study.Last,it may cause economic lose.In my opinion,it is not nessary for students to learn about stocks.覆盖了主要信息覆盖了主要信息;全文内容连贯全文内容连贯;但存在错误较多但存在错误较多,语法搭配有错语法搭配有错,
14、但不影响理解但不影响理解;requirements well loss necessary 4.第二档第二档(较差较差):(6-10分分)未恰当完成试题规定的任务未恰当完成试题规定的任务 -漏掉漏掉或或未描述清楚未描述清楚一些一些主要内容主要内容,写了一写写了一写无无 关的内容关的内容;-语法结构单调语法结构单调,词汇项目有限词汇项目有限;-有一些有一些语法结构或词汇方面的语法结构或词汇方面的错误错误,影响了对影响了对 写作内容的理解写作内容的理解 -较少使用语句间的连接成分较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连惯性内容缺少连惯性;信息未能传给读者信息未能传给读者.With the develo
15、pment of the new curriculums.Moreschools open optional courses,which is satisfied with students.One school lead into stocks as new curriculums.People have different oppinions about this,some are in favor of the opinion.It teached students knowledge about stocks.The course can make a preparation for
16、the future.Helping people set up managing money idea.Some people against it.They think that there is nopoint in studying.Students are crazy about stocks.Ifdistract attention,they can not study well.In fact,I think it is not good to students.本文覆盖了一些主要内容本文覆盖了一些主要内容 但是表意不清,表达错误但是表意不清,表达错误,影响意思理解影响意思理解乱
17、用标点,乱用标点,字数不足,内容缺乏连贯字数不足,内容缺乏连贯;5.第一档案第一档案(差差):(1-5分分)未完成试题规定的任务未完成试题规定的任务.-明显遗漏明显遗漏主要内容主要内容,写了一些无关内容写了一些无关内容,原因可能原因可能是是 未理解试题要求未理解试题要求;-语法结构单调语法结构单调,词汇项目有限词汇项目有限;-有有较多较多语法结构或词汇方面的语法结构或词汇方面的错误错误,影响了对写影响了对写作内容的理解作内容的理解-缺乏语句间的连接成分缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容很不连惯内容很不连惯;Resently,there have optional courses in many sch
18、ools.One school open a course of stocks.Some people think student know more about stockknowledge.I can make a preparations for looking for a way to society in the future.Except for supporting,many people against it.Some students in a poor control.They may get themselves into the stock.If they invest
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