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1、English Writing作文中应注意的问题作文中应注意的问题字体工整,书写清晰。字数在不能少于130词,写作时不要过分注意字数,应注意议论文要求结构严谨,语言简练,字数在150词左右即可。文体要统一,议论文中不宜用过分口语化的语句。如前面措辞很正式,而后面却写着:OK,this is what I want to say;Thats my opinion.Do you agree with me?;Thats all,thank you.;或前面论证完自己的观点,在结论部分却写着:maybe this is a good way to;perhaps you can choose作文中应
2、注意的问题作文中应注意的问题审题要注意,写作时主题要突出。如:标题是Pollution from Cars Part of this problem is the worlds exploding population.A growing population undoubtedly means more factories polluting the air.Besides,land and water pollution has also increased.Pollution is,in fact,threatening our health,our happiness,and our
3、civilization.文字要连贯,注意过渡词语的使用,使得句与句、段与段的衔接自然。It is clear that television news can vividly bring to us dramatic events of importance,such as wars,games and so on,but it can not cover important stories in detail they may deserve because of its time limitation.On the contrary,print news excels in its ab
4、ility to devote as much space to a story as it sees fit,though it cannot compete with television visually.Besides,television is essentially a passive medium.首尾要呼应,也就是说在结束段时应将前面的观点以另外一个句子再说一次,这样首尾遥相呼应,使文章表达主题准确、完整。如:HealthAs the proverb says,“No one knows the value of health until he loses it.”In oth
5、er words,nothing is more valuable than health.In conclusion,if you want your wish to come true,health is the most important ingredient of your success.写作中组句成段的技巧如何写好文章起始段起始段应说出你想阐述的观点,下面的段落才能展开这个观点。1.对立法 首先引出人们对主题的不同看法,然后提出作者自己的不同看法或偏向的那个观点。一般用于有争议性的主题。可用的句型:When asked about,the overwhelming majorit
6、y of/most/quite a few people think/believe/hold,other people regard/view/see/think of as,I view quite/a bit differently.Now a lot of/the majority of/most people believe/think/recon that.Although/Admittedly,there is no/little evidence/it is questioned whether.Nowadays,it is commonly/generally/widely
7、accepted/recognized/acknowledged that.They claim/believe/argue that,but I wonder/doubt whether如何写好文章起始段2.现象法对某种社会现象、倾向或社会问题进行剖析的文章往往在文章一开始首先引出这种现象或问题,然后评论。下列句型就适用于这种开头。Recently the phenomenon of/problem of/rise in has draw/aroused public/world-wide attention caused/aroused wide/considerable/internat
8、ional concernRecently the issue/problem of has been brought into focus/brought to public attentionSample:The problem of development vs.environment has now been in the limelight.Nowhere is the clash more visible than in china,where the worlds largest population faces pollution,deforestation and acid
9、rain on a large scale.如何写好文章起始段3.观点法文章开门见山,直截了当提出作者对文章要讨论的问题的观点,也即文章的中心思想。以下就是常用句型。Now people in increasing/significant numbers are beginning/coming to accept/be aware that.Now there is a growing awareness/recognition on the part of people of the necessity/importance to/of如何写好文章起始段4引用法文章开头引用名人名言,谚语,
10、或有代表性的看法见解来引出文章要展开讨论的一种观点。下面便是一些常用句型:1)“Awareness of ignorance is the beginning of wisdom.”/“Familiar notions are often those least examined.”/“Genius is 2 percent inspiration and 98 percent perspiration.”,such is the opinion/remark made by Bacon/Edison/one of the great men.2)This view/remark has be
11、en shared/confirmed now/time and again by more and more people.Sample:“Great minds must be ready not only to take the opportunity,but to make them.”Colton,a great writer once remarked.But it still ahs a profound significance now.To a person,in whose lifetime opportunities are not many,to make opport
12、unities is more essential to his success.如何写好文章起始段“”Thats how one commented/complaint/criticized he is hardly alone in the experience/many people have shared the experience like thisSample:“All I have learnt in college is junk.”Thats how one college graduate described his frustration I looking for a
13、 job.He is hardly alone in the experience.Actually there are thousands of college graduates who complain that the degree they took away cant help them to secure a rewarding job,and the knowledge they acquired in class cant be transformed into useful job skills.如何写好文章起始段5比较法比较法句型主要用于通过对过去与现在两种不同倾向、态度
14、和观点的比较,引出文章要讨论的主题。For years/Until recently had been/was seen/viewed/regarded asBut that is changing now/people are taking a fresh look at it.With the growing/mounting demand for/interested in/concern over,peopleSeveral years/decades ago,people Now,why do people/has such change taken place?如何写好文章起始段真
15、题(Nowadays it has become fashionable for college students to take a part-time job in their spare time.)Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trendSeveral years ago,people were often a little surprised when they heard that a college student was doing a part-time job.“Why?Maybe he is short
16、of money,”they thought.Nowadays,it is not an uncommon occurrence that college students are working as tutors,salesmen and tour guides.Many students put up advertisements on bulletin boards or lamp posts to search for odd jobs.Why do many students show great interest in a part-time or a summer job?如何
17、写好文章起始段6 问题法问题法句型主要用于讨论一个有争议性主题的文章。文章开头用一个要讨论或解答的问题设问,可以一下激起读者的兴趣。Should/what?Opinions of/Attitudes toward vary greatly.Some think of/regard/view as.Others argue/believe/claim.Sample:Should doctors ever lie to benefit their patientsto speed recovery or to conceal the approach of death?Peoples attitu
18、de toward the doctors lie varies from person to person.Some see important reasons to lie for the patients own sake;others think that truthful information should not be denied or distorted.如何写好文章起始段“Why.?/Can?”of all the complaints/discussions/debate I have heard,this is the one of most of frequently
19、 uttered/voiced.Sample:“Why do we have to learn all this dumb stuff?”Of all the complaints and questions have heard from my classmates during my college life,this was the one most frequently uttered.I would answer that it can widen your mind and prepare you for your future life.(2)如何写好文章主体段主体段通常由多个扩
20、展句(development sentence)组成。扩展句之间必须逻辑严密、条理清晰,这就要求考生掌握扩展句的发展方法,才能有层次的安排句子,组成首位连贯、结构严谨的段落。下面介绍4种最主要也是最实用的扩展句发展方法:原因结果型、引用数据法、举例说明法、事实证明法。原因结果型当分析和解释某一事物、某一现象时,可用这些句型来说明其基本的、多方面的原因。There are probably several/a number of/a variety of reasons for this dramatic/significant/marked increase/decline/growth in
21、 First secondWhy have/did/are?For one reason/To begin with/One reason is For another/In the second place/Another reason is Perhaps the main/primary/fundamental reason isThese factors,coupled with the growth/change/recognition/realization of(2)如何写好文章主体段引用数据法在说明某个观点时,有时需要借用一些报刊、社会机构或政府公布的调查数据和结果。下列句型是
22、供在引用数据时使用。According to a/the new/recent/latest survey/census,in 2001/from 1990 to 2001 increased/rose/dropped x percent/at a rate of x percent/an average of x percentMore than three quarters people preferred,compared with 20 percent last year.About 80 percent of the college bound said they still lac
23、ked“enough facts to make an informal decision”as to which college they should apply for.Over two-thirds wanted to know more about academic programs,student activities,faculty strengths and weaknesses,and living accommodations on campus.(2)如何写好文章主体段举例说明法在文章中,为了说明作者的观点,往往需要引用具体的实例来加以说明。下面句型就是在举例说明中可以采
24、用的。The most dramatic example of this is/This offers a typical example of this/As an illustration,we may takeJust imagine what would be like if/when/without(2)如何写好文章主体段事实证明法在文章论说中,为了阐述一个观点,也需要用一些事实和调查的证据来支持。下面句型可在引出这些事实和证据时使用。1)We must accept/admit/recognize the indisputable/undeniable fact that2)The
25、re is statistical/sufficient/considerable evidence that/to show that/in favor of3)Tests/studies/investigations have showed/revealed/indicated that(3)如何写好文章结尾段一般来讲,结尾有两个作用:一是总结全文要点,结论性结尾结论型句型主要用于通过文章前面的讨论分析,引出文章的中心思想和论点。From what has been discussed above/taking into account of all these factors/judgi
26、ng from all evidence offered,we may safely/reasonably arrive at/reach the conclusion thatIn summary/conclusion/a word,it is more important/valuable we should/must(3)如何写好文章结尾段号召性结尾It might be time to take the warning/advice of and to put great/considerable emphasis on the improvement/promotion/develo
27、pment of.(3)如何写好文章结尾段建议性结尾建议性句型主要用于在结尾处对文章所讨论的问题提出建设性意见,其中包括建议和具体解决问题的方法。It is hoped/suggested that considerable/sustained efforts should be made/focused on the attemptWhile/although it cannot be solved immediately/is affected by many factors/is simpler to say than to do,still there are ways.The most common/popular is Another way/method is Still another one is(3)如何写好文章结尾段引言性结尾引用名人名言或富有哲理的话来结束全文时,可采用下列句型。If we want to achieve our success/goal,we can learn from the words of Bacon/Edison
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