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1、部分续写主题结尾(默写篇)在读后续写中传达积极向上的正能量,是取得高分的要素之一。第二段最后一句具体操作分为两种,1. 有题目点题 2. 无题目升华主题。 今天告诉大家如何升华主题。只要运用以下技巧,就能轻松写出主旨升华句,实现让阅卷老师瞬间决定加分。大家一定要认真背诵默写,为高考默默努力。亲情 “love and support”: 1.泪水顺着我的脸颊滚落下来,那些年的故事一个接一个地闪现在我的脑海里。我终于感受到了妈妈给我们的无声而深刻的爱。Tears rolled down my cheeks and the stories of those years flashed into my
2、 mind one by one. I eventually felt the silent but profound love Mum had been giving us. 2.直到那时她才意识到是家人的支持和陪伴使她度过了人生的低潮。Not until than did she realize /recognize that it was the support and company of her family that enabled her to live through the low tide of her life. 3.我向她道歉,但她只是用她布满皱纹的手擦去我脸上的雨滴,
3、然后紧紧地拥抱了我。就在那一刻,我真切地感受到她单纯而深厚的爱,我将永远珍惜和保存。I apologized to her for my misbehavior, but she merely wiped off the raindrops on my face with her wrinkled hand and embraced me tightly. It was at that moment that I truly felt her simple yet profound love, which I would always appreciate and preserve. 语言 I
4、 raised my teary eyes, uttering what I had hidden in my heart for long , “ I love you forever.” With these words,I pulled her into my hug, enjoying the warmth and love she offered me . 友情与成长:friendship “冰释前嫌” 简约道歉动作He authentically /sincerely apologized /made an apology and begged for forgiveness. 语
5、言: She lowered her head , murmuring in a choked voice , “I am terribly sorry.” 道歉场景描写 smile pat hug/embrace 1.决定打破僵局,我走到她面前说:“我应该为我说的话向你道歉。我不是故意要伤害你的。”听到我的话,她愣了一下,然后脸上露出了笑容,这笑容就像一缕阳光,照亮了我阴暗的心。从那时起,我们的校园见证了我们亲密的友谊,给予彼此无尽的信任和爱。Deciding to breaking the ice ,I came up to her, uttering , “I owe you an ap
6、ology for what I said. I didnt mean to hurt you. ” On hearing my words, she froze and then put a smile on her face, which , like a ray of sunshine , brightened my gloomy heart. From then on , our campus witnessed our close friendship, giving other other endless trust and love. 2.她微笑着走到我跟前,拍了拍我的肩膀,然后
7、紧紧地拥抱了我,让我忘了这件事。我感激地拥抱了她,泪水涌上了我的眼睛,脸上绽开了笑容。With a broad/brilliant / radiant smile, she came up to me, patted me on the shoulder, and then hugged me tightly, telling me to forget about it. Gratefully, I hugged her back , tears welling up in my eyes, and a smile spreading on my face. 感悟:1.我明白了,友谊永远是力量
8、和勇气的源泉,不管前面有什么挑战。It dawned on me that friendship would always be a source of strength and courage, no matter what challenges lay ahead. 2.正如我们所看到的,友谊就像娇嫩的花朵,需要关注和呵护,反过来也会赐予我们青春的甜蜜。As we can see ,friendship , like tender flowers , needs attention and care , and in turn blesses us with the sweetness o
9、f our youth. 3.共同的经历在他们之间产生了坚实的友谊,这将他们紧紧地联系在一起。The shared experience generated solid friendship between them, which would tightly bond them through thick and thin. 4.她得到了一个重要的教训:每个人都应该受到平等的对待,不管他或她有多特别。She gained an important lesson that everyone should be treated equally no matter how special he or
10、 she was. 获助后 help/kindness1. 我意识到总会有人伸出援助之手。从那时起,我下定决心要把善良传递给别人。只有这样,我们才能为我们生活在一个更美好的世界。I realized there was always someone out there to reach out his helping hand.From then on, I made up my mind to pass on kindnessto others. Only in this way could we make a better world for us to live in. 2.从那时起,每
11、当遇到需要帮助的人,我都会不遗余力地帮助他们。只有这样,越来越多的人才能过上幸福的生活。From then on, whenever meeting/encountering people inneed , I would spare no effort to help them.Only in this way could more and more people be blessed with a happy life .3.这次经历激励我把善意传递给那些需要帮助的人,尽我所能创造一个更有爱的世界。The experience inspired me to pay forward the
12、kindness to those needy people, doing my little bit to create a more loving world. 4.他对帮助他人的奉献精神产生了连锁的善意反应,其他人开始以他为榜样,向那些需要帮助的人传播帮助和希望。His devotion to assisting/helping others created a chain reaction of kindness, and others began to follow his example, spreading help and hope to those in need.5.我紧紧
13、地抓着纸袋,眼泪不由自主地滚了下来。直到那时,我才认识到是爱使世界运转。I held the paper bag tightly, tears rolling down without control. Not until then did I recognize that it is love that makes the world go around. 助人后1.我永远不会忘记那个男人感激的眼神。我突然意识到,一个善意的时刻对另一个人来说可能意味着很多,一个简单的举动就能让世界变得更美好。Never would I forget the mans /the womans grateful
14、 eyes. It dawned on me that a moment of kindness could mean so much to another, and that a simple act was what it took to make the world so much better.2. 看到他/她感激的微笑,我感到一种真正的宽慰和满足。就在那一刻,我明白了那句老话的含义:“玫瑰送人,手中有香。Seeing his /her grateful smile, I felt a true sense of relief and content. It was at that m
15、oment that I got to know the meaning of the old saying , “Rose given and fragrance in hands.” ”历险 感悟:多么难忘的经历啊!事实证明,只要我们保持冷静,不放弃,总是有出路的。1.What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that theres always a way out as long as we stay calm and dont give up. 2.正是这次独特的经历使我明白,无论我们面临什么困难,都不能放弃希望。It was thi
16、s unique experience that made me understand that whatever difficulty we were faced with, we mustnt give up hope. 3. 那一天是如此难忘,它将永远留在我的脑海里,提醒我要保持冷静,用我们学到的东西来处理危机,拯救自己。That day was so unforgettable that it would stick in my mind forever, reminding me to keep calm and use what we learned to handle crise
17、s and rescue ourselves. 4.直到那时我才意识到,勇敢和智慧可以克服任何困难。Only then did I realize that it was bravery and wisdom that could conquer/smooth away any difficulty in the way. 个人成长/励志:1. 学习知识促“成长”正如一句名言所说:“活到老,学到老。”所以每个人都应该勇敢地接受更多的挑战,做出更多的尝试,直到成功的到来。 As a famous saying goes, “Its never too late to learn.” so eac
18、h individual should be brave enough to take up more challenges and make moreattempts till the arrival of success. .每当我觉得学东西为时已晚的时候,她的精神就像一座灯塔,照亮了我实现自我的道路。Every time I think it was too late to learn something, her spirit, working as a lighthouse, brightened my way to sailing towards the shore of self
19、 -fulfillment . 2.克服困难促“成长”成功之路并不平坦,充满挑战和困难,我们应该勇敢面对。只要我们不放弃希望,尽一切努力克服一切困难,我们最终一定会实现我们的目标。The journey to success is far from smooth but full of challenges and difficulties, which we should be brave to face . As long as we dont give up hope and make every effort to overcome all the difficulties, we w
20、ill surely achieve our goal /success eventually. 事实证明,我们的努力和团结改变了世界,成功地把曾经的失败者变成了公认的赢家As it turned out, our efforts and union made a world of difference, successfully transforming once losers into recognized winners. 3.战胜恐惧促“成长.正如我们所知,当恐惧袭来时,乐观和决心是将我们转变为无畏的战士并征服它所需要的。 As we can figure out ,when fear
21、 comes crowding in, optimism and determination are what it takes to transform us into a fearless fighter and conquer it. 4.战胜消极促“成长”我们无法改变过去。然而,当抑郁占据我们的时候,我们唯一能做的就是保持积极的态度,这决定了我们能达到的高度。We cannot change our past.However, when depression takes hold of us, the only thing we can do is to hold apositive
22、attitude, which determines the altitude we can reach. 5.战胜自卑促“成长”我笑了,因为我最终意识到自信的真正来源: 决定你真正是谁的不是你的外表,而是你积极的性格和强悍的能力.I smiled as I eventually realized the real source of confidence: its not your appearance that determines who you truly are,but your positive personality and strong abilities. 6.追逐梦想促“成
23、长”做梦永远不会太晚。只要你抓住机会,充分利用它并坚持下去,你就一定有机会实现你的梦想。Its never too late to dream. As long as you seize/grasp the opportunity, make full use of it and keep up , you are bound to have the chance to realize your dream. 某人的话;经历与教训1. 随着时间的流逝,他的话一直在我耳边回响/萦绕在我的脑海中,激励着我相信自己的内在力量,做真实的自己。As time went by, his words alw
24、ays echoed in my ears/lingered in my mind, inspiring me to believe in my inner power and stay true to myself. 2.当他要放弃的时候,教练那铿锵有力的话语在他耳边回响:“如果你相信自己,没有什么是不可能的。”/ 放弃者永不胜利,成功者永不放弃。When he was about to give up, the coachs powerful words echoed in his ears, “ If you believe in yourself, nothing is impossi
25、ble.” / “Quitters never win and winners never give up.” 3.在我的内心深处,那是多么美妙/难忘/宝贵的经历啊!Down deep in my heart,what a wonderful/an unforgettable/a valuable experience it was ! 4. 这是一次有趣的/有意义的/难忘的经历,它见证了我成长为一个负责任的成年人。It was an interesting/a meaningful/an unforgettable experience that I had ever had, which witnessed me to grow up to be a responsible adult. 环境描写呼应 若文本中有雨/雾 ,最后写彩虹和阳光; 文本中有暗黑冷夜,最后写温暖灯光;文本中有星辰,最后写朝阳升起 ; 文本中有炎炎夏日,最后写一树清凉;常见大团圆式续写结尾:遇险获救; 疾病痊愈; 误会解除; 梦想实现; 失物找到;痛苦消失 ; 旧观改变;亲情更和睦了; 学渣爱学习了 ; 真诚付出获得友谊; 道歉获得原谅 ; 努力最后成功; 语言都会感人(流泪); 陌生人都会真诚热心。
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