2024年读后续写沉浸式步步写作专题14如何续写八类话题.docx
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1、专题14 如何续写八类话题在高中阶段,一周最多有时间练一篇续写。我们不仅要写一篇会一篇,更要写一篇会一类,因为同一主题下的续写情节是可以复用的。通过把知识系统化,同一主题下很多情节是相似的,题目的情节是相似的,这又会导致后面在设计续写时的续写情节相似,而续写情节相似其实又指的是场景相似+感情相似。这样一环套一环,有意识的归纳(1)每篇续写前文的情节;(2)续写范文中的场景;(3)续写范文中的感情。这样就可以实现模块化写作了。一、助人篇故事构造三部曲【第一步:困难描写(消极情绪+困难处境)】【消极情绪】感到:1. a flush of (表情绪的名词)=a wave of.=a feeling/
2、sense of.一阵.2. joy/excitement/pride/anger/rage/panic/terror/sorrow/sadness/grief/embarrassment/disappointment/guilt/shame.)3. (表情绪的名词) flooded over sb=swept over sb因.颤抖:tremble/shiver/shake (with fear, panic excitement, rage.)【进一步细节描写】流泪:1. Tears blurred ones eyes. 2. Ones eyes got misty. 3. Ones ey
3、es misted/dimmed with tears.泪眼模糊4. .be close to tears几乎要哭了5. tears (roll down ones eyes/cheeks/face)泪水落下【第二步:助人过程呈现(想到办法+动作链)】【突然有了一个想法】某人想到/明白.:1. It suddenly occurred to sb that 从句=It hit sb that 从句=It struck me that 从句 =It dawned on sb that 从句2. (idea, thought.) occurred/came to sb.=.came/flashed
4、 into ones mind=.crowded in ones mind3. Ones mind began to race 【动作链】1. 主语+动作A+动作B and 动作C (三个并列谓语,动作依次发生) 2. 句子+ing/ed, 或者ing/ed+句子(使用条件:同一逻辑主语,主动或被动,表示动作伴随,原因或结果)【第三步:皆大欢喜结局(感激+感动+升华)】【突然有了一个想法】过了一段时间:1. not long after that,.=shortly afterwards, .=before long, .=It didnt take long before 从句=It too
5、k some time before从句不久, . 2. for an instant/moment一瞬间有了结果:1. To ones surprise(delight)/Strangely enough, it turned out that 从句2. But on second thoughts, .但是转而一想,.3. But what happened next was pure magic. 接下来发生的非常奇妙 【感谢】1. Now, I was definitely grateful to her for extending a helping hand(伸出援手).2. Mo
6、lly and Shawn met on Tuesday, and she says she couldnt thank him enough (非常感谢他)and everyone involved in for what they did for her. 【感动】1. Needless to say, they were deeply moved (他们被深深地感动了), especially Bernard who finally found a way to make money for his family. 2. He was touched that I, a complete
7、 stranger, cared so much about him (如此关心他) and said he was willing to work.3. In a flash, with tears welling up in my eyes, I was touched beyond words (感动得说不出话来). I felt so warm as if there were nine suns in my chest. 4. I nodded in gratitude, eyes glistening with held-back tears(眼睛因强忍的泪水而闪耀).5. Stu
8、nned and moved(惊讶又感动), I stared at the note, feeling a pang of guilt about my previous thought that all people were indifferent.【升华】 1. It is love that makes the world go round(是爱让世界运转)and Bernard felt it deep in his little heart.2. Everyone was happy and sweet, exposing their sets of white teeth(露出
9、他们洁白的牙齿).3. I made up my mind to pass on “love” to others(传递爱给其他人). Just as a saying goes : “ Roses given, fragrance in hand(赠人玫瑰,手有余香). ”4. From that day on, every time I meet someone who needs help, I always reach out to them, hoping to pass on the kindness (希望传递善意)that Mexican family offered me.5
10、. Sometimes, a small act of kindness may be powerful enough to make a huge difference(会有很大不同).2023年新高考I&II卷【作文比赛】作者上中学的时候,社会学老师邀请作者参加一个写作比赛。作者不喜欢写作,于是想都没想就拒绝了。但是在老师的鼓励下,作者同意试一试。作者在写作过程中虽然很累,但是没有放弃,坚持下来了。在作者最终完成写作时,作者感到写作让他很快乐,他已经不在乎输赢了。【第三步:皆大欢喜结局(感激+感动+升华)】【感谢】 I was so happy to hear the news that
11、I immediately shared it with my teacher. When I was invited to the stage to receive the award, I expressed my thanks to my teacher. I said, “Its you who make me fall in love with writing, my social studies teacher. Without your recognition and guidance, I couldnt have written this article. Again tha
12、nk you very much!”【感动】“I knew youd win! I am proud of you. You made it!” he said excitedly.My teacher was waiting for me. Holding my hands, he said “Congratulations! You are a good writer, so keep writing.”【升华】 Since then, I have written many good works and now I am a famous writer. I owe my success
13、 to my social teacher who is a beacon in my life on the road to writing.二、成长篇故事构造三部曲【第一步:成长前的苦恼(负面情绪塑造)】【孤独】 I never made friends easily, and for a time I did little more than get on speaking terms with some boys. 我从不轻易交朋友,有一段时间,我只是和一些男孩子说说话而已。【伤心】 I found nothing in my pocket, a fact that seemed li
14、ke a spear piercing into my heart ,which started to bleed immediately. 我口袋里什么也没找到,这事实就像一支长矛刺进了我的心脏,我的心脏立刻开始流血。Looking around anxiously, I almost burst into crying.(我焦急地环顾四周,差点哭出来) 【惭愧】She was overwhelmed / overcome/ consumed with guilt and shame .(她被内疚和羞愧淹没) A wave of guilt swept over me and I had t
15、o admit the fact that I had gone to the movies and that was the real reason why I was late.一阵内疚席卷了我,我不得不承认我去看电影了,这才是我迟到的真正原因。【嘲笑】They laughed loudly with Crawley screaming words like “What a finest broken watch!”他们大声笑着,卡劳利尖叫着说:“多好的一块坏表啊!”【绝望】“My mother wouldnt let me bring it,” I lied, desperation b
16、oiling inside me.“我妈妈不让我带,”我撒了个谎,绝望在我心里沸腾。【紧张】Meanwhile, Karie sat restlessly in her seat with her fingers crossed .与此同时,凯莉不安地坐在座位上,双手交叉着。She told the teacher the truth , with her heart thumping / pounding/ pumping like a drum. 她把实情告诉了老师,心怦怦直跳。Having paced up and down restlessly in front of the the
17、teachers office, she finally gathered courage and plodded in.(她在老师的办公室前不安地踱来踱去,终于鼓起勇气,慢吞吞地走了进去。【害怕】I unknowingly (不知不觉地) avoided interacting (interact) with anyone because I was afraid theyd laugh in my face .(我在不知不觉中避免与任何人互动,因为我害怕他们会当面嘲笑我)【犯错】Considering there was no way to persuade my mother to le
18、t me take the watch, I decided to wait for her to step outside and slip the watch into my pocket. So I did. 考虑到没有办法说服母亲让我带手表,我决定等她走出去,把手表塞进我的口袋里,我这样做了。Karie stuffed the test paper into backpack and explained that she was just too excited. 凯莉把试卷塞进背包里,解释说她只是太兴奋了。【第二步:成长中(蜕变塑造)】【惊讶】Raising her eyebrows
19、 in surprise, Mrs Rossi froze, as if rooted on the ground.罗西夫人惊讶地扬起眉毛,僵住了,仿佛在地上生了根。【希望】Jayce looked up to him, his eyes sparkling with hope and determination.杰斯抬头看着他,他的眼睛里闪烁着希望和决心。【教育与成长】“Thats not the right way. Patience, Will. Patience,” a voice echoed in my ears after the boys left.这不是正确的方法。耐心,意志
20、。当孩子们离开后,一个声音在我的耳边回响。“What was done was done,” thought I to myself. “What is important now is to do correct things next.”“所做的已经做了,”我自己想。“现在重要的是下一步要纠正一些事情。”Though anger, embarrassment and sadness hung heavily in the air, the voice drew me to the awareness of the mistakes I had made when I attempted t
21、o impress the boys.尽管愤怒、尴尬和悲伤重重地笼罩在空气中,但这个声音还是让我意识到我在试图给同学留下深刻印象时犯下的错误。I shouldnt have tried to integrate in such a hasty way, nor should I have stolen the watch behind my mother.我不该如此匆忙的方式试图融入,也不该把母亲身后的手表偷走。After school, I would tell my mother honestly that I had stolen the watch out to impress fri
22、ends who turned out not to be my true friends.放学后,我会诚实地告诉妈妈,我偷了手表是为了给那些不是我真正朋友的朋友留下好印象。After saying that with her face flushed red, she handed the paper and the prize to the teacher. 说完这话,脸红了,她把纸和奖品交给了老师。To my surprise, she smiled at me and expressed her apology for ignoring my loneliness as well as
23、 my difficulty with English communication.令我吃惊的是,她对我笑了笑,并为忽视我的孤独和英语交流的困难表示道歉。Torn between the honor and conscience, she had a restless night, tossing and turning on bed. 她在荣誉和良心之间挣扎,一夜不安,在床上辗转反侧。I plucked up my courage and took my first step onto the suspension bridge. 我鼓起勇气,向吊索桥走了第一步。He saw Trashau
24、n as a tough role model who had a seemingly similar born disability but led a brilliant life. 他认为特拉申是一个坚强的榜样,似乎有类似的先天残疾,但过着辉煌的生活。 We often take for granted the very things that most deserve our gratitude(那些值得我们感恩的事情我们经常当作理所当然).But when the time came, I got up on stage and faced one of my greatest fe
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